Ah, man... that's a great ending, but I was soooo hoping you'd make this a multichapter, because it's awesome and the best fic ever... :D :D

Wow. This feels so onesided... Great! I'm actually semi-fond of Ruka/Hotaru.

Yeah...

This reinforces my case that your writing is amazing.

You got me on the HayatexHotaru boat, no doubt.

Gee.

You are, for the lack of a better word, awesome. :)

Completely kawaii, totally humorous. Narumi and the blessing - I loved that. The part about Subaru, too. :) I really don't actually think this is OOC, but I'm new to this particular fandom, so...Anyway, amazing job. You're going on to my Favorite Authors list, kudos to you.

Hayate is so sweet!

Hayate's in the same class as Tsubasa..Which means he's 13 or 14 years old

I guess Hotaru was a bit (like... .0999999 milimeters) OOC, but I can picture her saying those things. And I loved it! Hayate and Hotaru is so kyuute together!

Ahh...Ahahaha. XD

Kudos to you, my friend. Nobody could've ever done that better without keeping the HayateHotaru essence alive. Hayate got pwned, lawls. Ahah, and Hotaru was still kick-butt (- chosen due to some censored issues) awesome, you know that? X) I don't know, but somehow I can still manage to be annoyed even through Hayate's persevering attitude. There's something to it that's really grating on my nerves, but I appreciate it for a tiny bit as well. (: Weird, huh?

foxtrotelly

Sometimes people can just never learn...

*Sighing sympathically at Hayate's denseness*

really good.

But why are their ages so different?

it's the first hayatexhotaru fanfic I've ever i think they will be a good pair if given the chance

loved it by the way

I LOVED IT!

i really adore Hayate x Hotaru!

there really cute together :D

nice work!

ASJDFJDFJ I'M SO HAPPY THAT SOMEONE WROTE HAYATExHOTARU!

I don't exactly support it, but IMO, it's an adorable pairing, and I was moronically grinning while reading the entire thing. I think everyone was perfectly in character. I love Hotaru's threats and Hayate's reactions. XD

Ahh A Hayate and Hotaru fic, finally I found someone who wrote about these two. Who would have imagine that there were only TWO HayatexHotaru fics out there. I truly adore this pair (and RukaxHotaru). But this is a one-shot right? -sigh- Ah well, at least someone wrote about them, couldnt ask for more.

And I must say, you are an amazing writer, no wonder you were voted as Author of the Year, and that three of your stories were also voted for best drama, romance, and one-shot. I haven't read them yet, but I will soon. So you'll probably see my reviews in more of your stories soon.

so Kawaii...

urgh.. I'm so overusing that word lately.

Oh well. At first I was like... who's Hayate again...

and then I went OH!

XD

It was fantasmariffical!

Thanxs!

Ai-chan