This is a really interesting series. I hope to see more!

I think I like this chapter the best so far. I've enjoyed watching the dynamic of these two onscreen, and I think this little piece is very sweet in the way it brings more light into Boyd's attachment to Echo.

Keep up the good work!

The last one was good and actually put some depth to Topher. This one though, I think might be my favorite so far. I really like how you painted Boyd and his relationship with Echo. He is becoming more protective of her the more he's with her, and the more time passes, so I think this chapter is very accuate in regards to that.

I am loving these little ficlets you're doing. How they're bringing out so much in each character. Maybe you'll bring highlights into all the characters we've seen so far? I hope so.

Please keep up the great work.

I really like this insight. I don't think I have even seen a story with this character in it so far, and you did a really good job portraying her loneliness and making her somewhat likable, which is hard since I had her pegged for a stalker right from th start, but this makes me feel more compassion towards her.

Erin

This is very well done. Your insight into each person is well thought out and done articulately so. I especially like chapter two and three. I like how you portrayed the relationship between the two in chapter two, and in chapter three I like how you seem to reach into Mellie's very thoughts and express her anguish clearly. You make her more sympathetic and fleshed out than what's been done so far to her character in the show. Job well done.

This is very well-written, and a very good view into what Echo must be like. Good job.

I think you worded the whole process perfectly. I'm especially impressed by how you can make so few words say so much.

I'll be looking forward to more.

I think that pretty much sums it all up--when things go well. When they don't. . .