this was brilliant! i couldnt stop laughing! i love how random it is and that Holmes keeps punching sebastian and watson keeps crying lol :)

Hrm, I'm sad to say that I didn't enjoy this one quite as much as the first, although there were certainly many giggles to be found. It seemed like you were trying a bit too hard, especially with the running jokes - the curry, Mycroft's weight, and the 'Sherlock' issue. On the other hand, I must admit that the spontaneous use of 'Rasputin' put me in a bit of a fit - in a good way, I mean.

I also think I liked it better having Holmes and Watson as side-characters, caricatured and lampshading themselves left and right but still more serious than our Sebastien and Mulberry; thus the foils and (if you'll forgive the double-entendre in the term) straight men that made Mulberry and Sebastien's silliness really shine. Holmes spontaneously punching people was particularly jarring, although it became one of the better running bits, particularly in regards to the 'prevention' line.

I also have to admit to loving the overt slashiness, both the Shwatsonlock and the one-sided Sebastien/Mulberry, but that's because I'm a slash fangirl at heart.

Hey, what about that third story you promised, huh?

Anyway, this was a hilarious read. Great job.

cheers

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P.S. You know, I'd like to translate it into Polish. Is that OK with you?

Wow, so funny I nearly fell off my chair laughing. Absolutely brilliant

I hardly ever review, so feel honored! ;) This, in fact, is less of a review of this hilarious, original story, and more of a desperate plea for more Domesday Books and updates on all your other fantastic writings. (Especially, especially the McGonagall/Snape story!) So get crackin!

Brilliant. *wipes eyes* Oh, god, that was hysterical. I love the slashiness (naturally, of course ;) but you do it so well. Sebastian is a creation of genius. *waves little Domesday flag*

ah. you read discworld then? this is hilarious

::is laughing so hard she can scarcely type::

Oh dear, that was naughty. *grins* I'd love to see more about these two. Your humor writing is incredibly funny.