|Reviews for Indiana Jones and other Outtakes from The Elite|
| Guest 10/7/11 . chapter 1
I absolutely adore this fic. Pretty please do an outtake where Alice chose Jackson? He has to be my favourite OC ever.
| Me and Mr McCarty 5/17/10 . chapter 5
HEHEHEHE Hewo FoG!
it is i in disguise as the Emmett Contest!
Heart and I were pimping you out.. as always and she mentioned that she'd NEVER READ THE POOL SCENE!
So we read together. And I still. STILL love this and I can't WAIT till the 26th to make MORE people love it all in the Readalong.
"I couldn't tell her all those thoughts that floated through my head on a daily basis. I couldn't find words for what happened when I got lucky enough to have sex with her.
But I could make that promise and keep it, even if the rest would have to go left unsaid."
Love that. I love your Em, this is the first story I rec when people ask for good Em fics. Even if they are pansy ass and dont want to read non canon. PISH EM AND ALICE BELONG TOGETHER!
Loved it, love you! Love me xo Cass
| edwardsfavoritebrunette 1/4/10 . chapter 5
I can't believe I just found this! My heart feels whole again- i've been blue balled figuratively by not reading this story for so long! I think I'm going to reread again, then by the time I finish it, I would forget enough of these outtakes that I'd be able to read them again!
Pathetic, my life is.
Real life awaits, though sometimes I just want to put myself in this wonderful world you're created for us. Muah!
| FlapperGirl 12/13/09 . chapter 3
"When he was a man who was yours, he was yours until the days the stars fell out of the sky. And when he said you were his, he meant that from tips of the curls at his temple, to the soles of his pinkie toes.
And now those pinkie toes were mine."
| shirt 8/17/09 . chapter 5
Aw, I thought that there would be more Edward/Alice here. Only one chapter of goodness here? :P
Edward's so adorably gangly, awkward at times, nonchalant, easygoing, blunt, nice, and a great friend all at once. (In your story particularly-other stories don't have all of those good characteristics of Edward.) More Edward!
| speace2 6/21/09 . chapter 3
Love all things Jasper.
| twifan7731 6/11/09 . chapter 1
Loved the last line - dude you have the clapper! Loved it!
| twifan7731 6/11/09 . chapter 5
I really liked reading from Em's POV - poor boy has it bad! Too bad that they both can't or haven't done it with him on top. He thinks he will break Alice - doesn't he know that she is stronger than that? This Em is nice to read - better than most I have read! Thanks!
| coco1984 5/27/09 . chapter 5
So sad... Emmett really cares and gets so seemingly screwed over in the story. Poor Em...
| VoldieBeth 5/26/09 . chapter 5
Aw I loved this from Emmett's point of view! And vagina is so NOT a sexy word! I agree with Emmett! Hm I'm going to have to try out z as a sexy word... LOL
| acirelemagne 5/25/09 . chapter 5
loved it. i love to get peeks into what this emmett is thinking, he's different from the way most emmetts are written. he;s just so good to read! and i love that you said alice has a honky tonk butt! that killed me! and jasper checking it out, haha!
| BITTENEV 5/25/09 . chapter 5
*sigh* As always, that was fabulous and I'm in love with this Emmett. His inner dialogue makes me laugh and swoon all at once.
Umm I'm thinking you need to do an outtake where Emmett finally gets his wish of being on top of her. Poor Alice may break but she's a lot stronger than he thinks. The two of them together are perfect and I love reading it.
| MissLoonyLovegood 5/24/09 . chapter 5
Aw! So sweet... and slightly awkward. And y'know, I think that's what makes your lemons so great is the slight awkward factor you throw into some of them. .
| LoVet 5/24/09 . chapter 5
Hot ;]. I liked the fact that you wrote Emmett as the bf that had to work out and feel exhausted to go to sleep. iunno it just seems like a scenerio that seems very Emett like.
Well anewayz great update, but what else should I expect from an amazing writer like yourself !
| overzealousbunny 5/24/09 . chapter 5
*le sigh* Oh Emmett.. you just.. your gorgeous *another le sigh*
Wow Mamma THANKIES HUGE! *Runs and tackle huggles you and then multitudes of thin mints fall from the sky like chocolate round rain and Jackspers and Kellmett's land gently around us*
That was brilliant! I'm so glad we got the extra smexin! And I agree.. that movie with Neve and Denise.. even I'd turn for that ;) lol Its hawt.
Faboo Brain Mamma! A perfect extra way to see our lil Elite friends off... by my favorite couple getting off!