I like this fiction very much. It wouldn't surprise me if this fan-fiction turns out great when you would continue it and I, same with most people, love to see it continue.

Also, I like the concept of putting movie monsters from the past into the history of Cloverfield and ofcourse how you put things in it that are happening around the world where you can also make a story around about how that turns out.

Who knows, looking forward. :)

Ooh, I liked this! Especially how you tied the previous monster movies in with Cloverfield. I liked the concept - well done!

My, the human race is facing a lot of trials & tribulations at the hands of giant monsters (some of which is the fault of the human race itself). King Kong, Gojira, Godzilla, the Korean creature (which one is that?), & finally, The Cloverfield Creature. Now the seismic activity off the coast of Japan (where Clover originated from) & those spiders up in the mountain & that meteor in the desert. How much more can our race take before the monsters eat us alive? Guess all we can do is prepare for their coming. BTW, something interesting to note. The Cloverfield Creature... IT WAS JUST A BABY!! So think about this. If that monster was just a baby, what do you think an ADULT will look like? Maybe that's an adult causing the seismic activity... maybe it's the Cloverfield Creature's mother wanting her child back. Whatever it is, I think the city had BETTER evacuate while they still can. Well, anyway, see ya.

Ah; i liked it though did you make up the spiders and meteor? It would definitely make a good cloverfield fic; as a continuation from this.
Let me know if you decide to do it.

Nice! I like how you tied Cloverfield in with other great monster movies, namely the Godzilla series. As for a future fan fic, I say bring it on! We need more Cloverfield related stories, and I can't wait to see what you come up with!