So cute!

This is absurdly cute. I can't get over how adorable sparkling Jazz is! *squeals*


Personally I'm glad you didn't write any smut... >.<
I'm not anti-yaoi or anything like that, but I much prefer the two of them as friends. :D

"I say sorry really well?" Jazz suggested in reply.

*laughs*

I like your depiction of a youngling Jazz who is oddly charming yet troubling all at the same time. True, I am a small, middling TF slash fan, but I honestly fail to understand the romantic appeal of Prowl/Jazz or vice-versa. So, I obviously like what you have done here; twisting such a “suggestive” challenge into an adorably, fluffy story that is free of errors. It must have taken some earnest thought.

hehehe... 'Uh-oh...' Jazz says. :) heh that was so sweet! Poor Prowl probably had a spark attack. Not to mention that Megatron was actually NICE

*cough* I was expecting something... more mature *cough*

Cute! XD

This is quite humorous, and I love the characterization you gave everyone, especially the young Jazz and Prowl. I can only imagine Megatron's reaction. :)

Too funny. But why did you end it there? I wanted to read what horrible thing would happen to the two when Megatron finds the medal.

oh this was so very cute and funny. The really funny part was the part where Megatron was understanding. As always Jazz is so cute.

This was absolutely adorable on LJ (so adorable that I printed it out and added it to my fan fiction scrapbook).

Favorite line is
"What are you doing up there?"
"Chewin'"

*grins*

LOL! That is so cute and so funny. Little Jazz was just adorable. Although I doubt Megs will stay amused for long when he sees his medal...

D'aww. And it's sometimes hard to get mad at them. :3

aw, that was cute. I can actually share that one with my nephews.

Lol. V. cute. :-)

5 mins later Megatron bursts out the room guns blazing, the Autobots are forced to defend themselves but, alas, the Decepticons are on their lunch break. They return and find Megatron under fire and feel compelled to defend him. So begins the Autobot/Decepticon war...

I'm sorry but that's been stuck in my head all day and I had to get it out. I love your story.

I guess I just found a new definition of "cute". Little Jazz surely is a hand full, but if you would excuse me now
*runs before Megatron sees the bite marks*

:D that was funny. I had a good laugh!