Reviews for Educating Mr Motomiya

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10tative 2008-02-20 ch 15,	abusewhat a fun reading!! interesting plot and development, also the characters fit perfectly very amusing and refreshing
Kayhera 2006-03-20 ch 15,	abuseThis is the first Takari, let alone Zero Two, fanfic I've read that wasn't written by my best friend or was about Adventure people that just happened to be in the Zero Two age... I could never get into Zero Two as much as the other seasons. I'm sure it's quite good but I've only seen about ten odd episodes of it and wasn't that entertained by them... And Takari fanfics are quite clichiey (I won't try to spell that...). Barely any substance into them basically. I only read this one because it looked hopeful and I was quite bored. And I'm really glad I read it because it was a lot of fun! 'Specially random disclaimers. ^_^ It makes me want to stop being a Kouichi-kun girl long enough to give Yamato a hug (but a quick hug because there's a lot of rabid fangirls that'll kill me...And Jun...shudders). Well, back to the story. O.o Maybe you didn't do much Daisuke bashing but what's up with TK's hat?? Okay, Adventure makes sense but I like the Zero Two one! It's cute! ^^ Though it sounds like he's rather obsessive with it like goggle heads with their goggles. And there was Cody bashing but I honestly can't blame you. ^^ And Tai/Sora/Yamato bashing. Hehe. On my website I make Yamato confused by Sora too. Poor Yamato-kun. :D I keep changing the subject. -_-' Sorry, kinda hyper. I hope you don't mind long reviews because it's getting there. A story with a simple idea...those are fun! They're easier to write and nice to read (not much thinking! :P). And the Takari moments were really sweet. Really. This is coming from someone who can take Takari in small doses before their head gets spinny. Hikari was actually in character and NOT annoying. Hikari can be really cool if done right. Kind of like Kagome of InuYasha: like Hikari she's a character that most people are annoyed with and call pathetic. They don't give her a chance to show her true colors. Sure, a few times Hikari can be annoying on the TV show (I've heard, haven't actually seen, mind you). I think you captured the good parts of Hikari. Bravo!! looks up at big Hikari paragraph Erm, ditto TK? ^^ I actually rarely have a problem with TK and he was really cool in this fan fic. Cheers! Daisuke...Daisuke...Well, he was Daisuke! His Hikari obsession was kept to a decent level to where it was not choking you. >_< For an odd reason I don't have much to say about the lad, sorry. :P ...It was cute! And I think I'll have to go read more fan fiction by you. Even if all you can write is Takari I'm sure I'll enjoy it because you capture them perfectly! (keep in mind I mean both them being a couple and them being "best friends" because they really were wondfully written either way.) Ja ne! Au reviour? My French is horried...shudders
hannah g 2005-09-28 ch 15, anon.	abuseThat story rocked! All ur stories rock! 'spically ur takaris, plz could u tell me where i can find the toei bios u were talking about? i would love to read them!
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 15,	abusePoor Kari, pig tails . . ugh. What did Davis' family think of all this? I DOUBT they expected him to win, so I doubt they had anything planned, I wonder how they reacted to this. “Thanks, but Takeru’s right," He never gets a break when he needs one does he? “I don’t know, Dai. You’re the smart one here; you tell me.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 13,	abuseSorry to say, but I just skip over the OOC comments before and after the story. You did that on purpose didn't you? Making us think it was Kari at first. Because opposites attract, don’t they? That's the cruel reason Ken and Davis are Digivolution partners. what is the S.I. unit for current?
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 12,	abusewould never let them past the parking lot. Because the digimon would be a spectical or what? but everyone knew you became a Actually, most agreed that 03's Cyberdramon is the only digimon with a seperate personality to his other forms. just weren’t meant to be crossed. * Tell that to Jeri and Leomon. Ugh! "He’s a lot smarter than you think!" Maybe . . . but random trivia is not his strong point, even -I- admit that. what’s the study of the interaction between the air and the solid bodies moving through it?" I don't know that one and . . . wait a minute! Airodynamics!! I just never heard of it being used in that kind of context before. I just wonder how long everyone isn't going to speak to Davis after this . . . after they're done telling him how stupid he is of course.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 11,	abuseI'm sure Yomato wouldn't be half as shock as Taichi was at an Izzy + Sora. How'd that happen anyway? a bingo sign Yamato squinted as the sodium lights flashed blindingly off of them. Who'd have thought those who do TV for a living would know what they were talking about. smile HEin smile in and nervously adjusted his tie. You said the costumes were identical. I just hope goggle boy walks away from this with his self respect intack (everything has its limits, even Davis' ego.)
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 10,	abuseThat poor man . . . how hard WOULD it be to find someone else? I'm more actually worried about Davis screwing up because of this more then TK! Davis has a BAD habbit of being emotionally . . . over . . . reactive . . excuse, I need to go look in a mirror!
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 9,	abuseI wonder who else is on Ken's team? Not that they actually need anyone else. Davis knows he can't win, but he feels that he simply needs to, why Kari thinks he just doesn't realize it. A hero doesn't need to have his village burned to the ground for him to be tragic.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 8,	abuseDavis fought and beat his inner demons while the others were stuck in Myotismon's illusions, that's one thing no one is ever going to be able to take away from him . . . . Sorry, but I just as Kari can't stand Davis disliking TK's taste in hats, I can't stand Kari hitting Davis over the head so to speak. I know Davis is ignorant, but he's not team rocket stupid.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 7,	abuseI'll never understand (unless they were religious phobics) why the dubbs changed Joe's symbol from Faith. one of America’s major exports was Leonardo di Caprio. Heh . . . which is kinda true when you think about. Heh heh! and, although some of them were reluctant to admit it, How come? TK and Davis have ONE thing in common at least, both of them are the kind who simply refuse to break. And come on . . . TK DOES have bad taste in hats you know.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 6,	abusedutch, ? Poor Davis, he's just being played and paying for it. I sympathize with Kari of course, but you know what they say about karma.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 5,	abuse** Nope, they switched it Kaimeraimon. Davis' crest is Miracles, Ken's (I think his full name is Kenji) is Kindness, while Willis' is Fate. I don't know about Cody and Yolei. I think there might a reason Davis can't stand fish. Maybe his body has a bad reaction to them.
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 3,	abuseYou think Tai would be the ONE person who wouldn't mind Davis going out with Kari besides the boy himself. Also, isn't Kari being a bit cruel to Davis for playing his feelings like this so just their school can get some extra cash?
Alex Warlorn 2004-03-05 ch 2,	abuseDavis more dump then Mimi? Come on, isn't that a kinda cruel thing to say? Also, Kari could just ASK Davis to do it and he would, goggle boy two would walk on hot coals for her and do it with a smile and you know it.

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