Very good writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as is humanely possible, so that others may enjoy this story.

Oh my lord Dottie. This story is amazing. It was a little confusing at the begining of this chapter, bu ti got it. Update soon.
->Booky(:

Oh yes... I'll put this on story alert...

I like this a lot. Please keep writing as it is really good stuff.

Full Moon. Somehow, that sounds like Twilight. XD. -shot-

You're doing wonderful. Post it in the commy? :D

~ezyl'd

Short, but interesting. You have a neat style of writing, do continue!

~Lee

I love it. Please keep going. So Thuke, so wonderful. Please keep going!

OH! Dottie, this gave me chills! I love it so far. Update soon!

Ha. Found a compy that'll work. n_n

This is a very good start, Dottie. I'd like to expand, but it's so short I can't find anything. Word choice and sentence forms do make it really interesting to read, yes. :D

~for exampled

Interesting...But it really doesn't jump out at me from all the other fics about the demigods and their resentment towards their parents\uncertainty about the future. Good start though!