Thank you for updating! This was amazingly done, but poor Enna. I wasn't expecting that at all. Poor Reselda too, I suppose. Please write more soon. x

Oh my god! Why the heck would she kill herself!?! Oy, this was surprising! And happy thanksgiving, enjoy the break!

Very Good story, love the story, the chapter was good, except now I'm disgusted. Drinking hot lemon water in an attempt to quell my sinus infection and post-nasal drip does not put me in an mood to easily accept this in a story I had been enjoying. Your a good author so please don't let this get you down. Hoping to see more chapters, love characters.

! Reselda! I did not expect that at all! I bet Enna gets Erec. That's my guess :) However in love with Aramir she is, I still think she and Peter are adorable, but alas...
GREAT chapter! Very good plot-twist wise, that just blew me right out of the water.

all the best

update soon. please.

Reselda! What on earth were you thinking?!
Oh poor Enna and dear Aramir. I wonder how Lord Bodmor is going to take this in regards to Enna. What sad lives these two have... No wonder she kept saying "Another one... another one..."
Please update soon! Don't leave us in suspense!

ow wow.
she killed herself..?
wow.
i didnt expect that, like at all.
but it was written very truthfully.
so now Enna has to be like a mother?

i have just finished reading both your stories.
i think you are a good writer, and both stories are very well written.
However, I think it is time you let Aramir and Enna be more than friends. If Aramir doesnt love her back, then whatever, but something needs to happen soon.
throughout this whole story i have been knowing that they will hopefully be more than friends, but it has been dragged out so long- i just want it to happen already, because you could get so much more from this story if you let something good happen to Enna for once.

And although I think this story is good, I think you have missed a bit on Peter's charcter.
Fair enough, it is your interpretation, but I just don't think someone as compassionate as Peter would pass off Enna's grief from telling her father that her brother is dead with just a "Ah. Poor dear. Well, we're setting up camp and making the war room ready."
It just ISNT HIM. Peter is loving and protective; overly protective, sure, but he doesnt let things go easily.
It just doesnt seem right to me.
And what happened to Tamlyn? She seemed to just dissapear!
I was really enjoying her character, and her flirtation with John.
It just seems like everyone except Enna is missing out on the love part.
This is under the genre of Romance, remember?
Other than that, the story is good.
Thanks :)

Update soon.

Hey,
Don't rlly have time to log in, i have to get to class asap, but just wanted to review and say this:
WHOA! OK, Bodmor, srsly, WHOA! his coldness to Enna was WAY unexpected. he'd better make it up to her ;D I will DEFINITELY vote for your story, esp for Enna as best OC, so just lemme know when that is! GREAT chapter, just the thing to read before class!
Can't wait for more!
Cheers!
~redrose7856

update soon. please.

I can't believe her father said that to her! I know he was grieving, more deeply than her because he'd known the boy all his life, but still! She's hurting too!
I hope they all make up and Reselda doesn't hold it against Enna in the end.
Great chapter!
Update soon!

You left it so long without updating, but this chapter was worth it! It was amazing, even if it was amazingly sad. Thanks for updating.Please do so again, sooner! x

Oh how I long to give a lengthy review, but my contacts are getting all blurry from being up so late- so I'll have to hurry it up.
I loved this chapter. I feel like sighing with how happy I am that the marriage is no longer standing. Now she can marry Aramir and they can live an obscure and happy life in Archenland! :D
I love the ending, how they are still friends, through it all. I just hope it doesn't sound like one big scandal!
And, since I gave forty reviews in one day- I do hope it will thoroughly encourage you to update quickly.
:D

Haha. Just as I finished this chapter, my brother talked in his sleep. It always makes me laugh...
Anyhoo, I enjoyed this chapter as well. I'm glad there wasn't too much of an awkwardness with Ed and he did call them 'sisters' after all. Perhaps it won't be too awkward after all.

Ugh! I'm so tired, but since there are only two chapters left, I'll tough it out.
I loved King Lune's laughter at the absurdity of the whole thing. And how Robin's childish ways found their way into Anvard.
It's always when things seem darkest that Aslan shows his face most clearly. :D