One of the best Jalex I've ever read :) Beautifully written. And it's the kind of Jalex written in the way that doesn't make me feel weirded out that I actually support a ship that screams incest.

Selena and David just make me love Jalex that way ;)

Hope you write more soon.

man i wish there was more to this! i liked the beauty and the beast reference :)

That was adorable!

i loved this!

I'm totally gonna stalk your Wizards of Waverly Place fics now by the way :] A very nice one-shot, not quite as good as the really long one but still infinitely better than any other Jalex story. I usually picture Alex pining for Justin but you did this nicely. The jealousy was sweet and they were perfectly in character

I adore this fic. It's so wonderfully written.

Wow. That was such an intense and wondefully written story. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading this. The emotion and turmoil that Justin was feeling was making me feel for him. Wanting something that he knows he can never have and living day by day with that struggle inside him. Such a well written story. You're a really good writer. Now I'm off to read all your other stories! :D

Absolutely beautiful

Congratulations!


Truly the best of the Alex/Justin fanfics on this site, by far.
You actually managed to capture the mental trauma within the main character and mend it into a coherent and beautifully developed storyline.


Now put that potential to use once again and make another one!

That was amazingly written. There are so little Jalex fanfics in the WOWP section, and this has to be one of the best ones.
I liked the ending. It seemed incomplete, yet complete at the same time. Those are the best endings.
Awesome job. Keep writing.

aw omg i love justin and alex stories! this is amazing i wish you would write another one in alex's pov!

This story was one amazing. I have read quite a bit of WOWP fics and many Jalex ones; a lot of them have good premises but are poorly well written. Yours was one that had both qualities. The plot was intriguing and you wrote very well. I love the internal conflict you portrayed with the character of Justin. A lot of Jalex stories shows them getting together too quickly and making the stories anti-climatic and unrealistic. I hope you write one more. But even if you don't, this remains one of the best (if not the best) Jalex stories I have ever read on .

I loved it! It was really good, poor Justin though...

Cute, cute, cute. :D

I think that writing about a sibling having feelings for another sibling is a hard thing to do. I mean, to mostly anyone, let's admit, it's a bit strange and awkward. However...you really wrote it amazingly!! I haven't read many Wizards of Waverly Place stories, and I'm not going to say it's my favorite or anything. But the fact that you were able to write THIS absolutely blows my mind. Like, no joke. From what I've seen of the show, your characters were highly in character. I could see everything happening right before my eyes, as if instead of reading it all, I was watching it. I just love when that happens in a story! It's absolutely amazing!

Writing what you wrote takes extreme talent, my dear. Like, extreme. And you have that extreme talent that it took. It was absolutely, 100 percent amazingly fantastic. You wrote it so well, I can barely believe it.

Flawless.
-Lani

This was really good!! :)