That was freaking cute -

awww! i'm so glad you wrote for this pairing! i love it. i was watching this movie earlier, and in the scene at the mall where Vanessa finally feels the baby kick, Juno gives her this look and i was like "holy SHIP, batman! they're in love!" :)

Halfway through the fic, I was thinking I was hoping someone would write this ship. It was along about the line where you were talking about Vanessa being awkward in her own skin. And to be honest, when I started reading, I thought the relationship would be friendship, but I am *far* from disappointed! XD

Wow.

I did NOT know this was going to be a Juno/Vanessa.

I liked the pairing, it was very interesting.

Unexpected too!

The story though needed to be more developed.

Your paragraphs were short and lacking detail.

Some more emotion would have been great. Show details between Juno and Vanessa.

3/5

That was very cute. I loved it.

Huh. I must say, this is a very unique idea you have here. In fact, it was so intriguing I had to read it. I was pleasantly surprised though.

Kudos to you for making it work. :]

This is really good.

When i watched this movie a few weeks ago, i really liked this pairing.

You really ahould keep writing this...its really good...OMG! i loved it! XD XD

Wow. I am absolutely amazed, this was...just so amazing! It made my day. Thank you. If you have time and would wish to discuss writing sometime e-mail me at

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