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vividlyvibrant
2009-10-12 . chapter 3
Ehehehehehe oh, how how I love the mysteries...
cin425
2009-08-30 . chapter 3
I miss this.
Any updates coming soon?
syrical
2009-08-15 . chapter 3
Aww, this seems like a really awesome concept you've got going on! I agree; the next-life Axel/Roxas fics are all over the place, but it's so rare and so refreshing to see a Riku/Sora one for a change. I've just got a tiny critique for characterization, in that Sora seems rather overly hyperactive and dense at times, so I personally think that could be toned down a little, especially since he's older than his canon KH2 self here and should be even (just slightly!) more mature. I really like Riku, though, and Axel as the stalker is perfect. XD

I'm looking forward to seeing how this plot develops! Hope to see an update soon. :)
A-diction
2009-08-04 . chapter 3
Hi there! This is pretty good so far, and I'm interested to see where it goes. Cookies for you, I really like it, and I'll be waiting for more.

I'll be watching!
DeNiSaY60
2009-07-14 . chapter 3
Aha this is getting so interesting!! You ned to update!! :O
DeNiSaY60
2009-07-14 . chapter 2
Kairi's gonna be mad Sora didnt get her cookie! XD
DeNiSaY60
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Thats funny that Sora did forget his own name. I would be too, except I wouldnt even say my name. I would be staring into Riku's beautiful eyes! <3
Nush-Mish
2009-06-26 . chapter 3
THE PLOT THICKENS.

/CAPSLOCK

I love this story. The idea is way, way cool and everyone's so cute here! I can just imagine everyone's reactions, when Sora and Kairi do their little "HELLO HUSBAND/HELLO WIFE" thing xD

Keep it up! :)

~nush
Baciare
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
i hope you don't mind all these weird reviews from me, haha. "ET TU, NECK?" from the first chapter made me laugh for a straight five minutes, ahaha. gotta love the allusion to julius caesar. (; i love the way you write sora! and riku! and roxas and axel and everyone else, haha. sora's wife&husband thing with kairi makes me giggle.

sora's mental blabbering and his "splendiferous" are absolutely lurve. sora is like this super adorable child, hehe. i really hope you find time to update your rikusora fics soon. :D<3
chibi heishi
2009-06-03 . chapter 3
Huh. Seems like Riku knows more than he's telling. And is Roxas going to remember Axel, or will Riku scare 'Mr Creepy' away before the blond gets to meet him again?

Actually, since you can't tell me without giving away the story, I'll just have to wait and see.
Kingdom hearts birth by sleep
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
please update! i wont more so good! wont to find out what is rung with Sora!
Rockinpandabear
2009-05-05 . chapter 3
Holy crap marry me. xD
Your Sora made me laugh I'm not kidding. I like the feel of this story, Please Update! Hahaha sorry I got a bit hyper reading the story ehehe...
You rock =D
b4k4 ch4n
2009-04-29 . chapter 3
Woot! Finally got the chance to read chapter 3 xD
I'm still loving Sora to bits. He's a lot of fun to read and his relationship with Kairi is hilarious xD Though Riku looks really confused with the whole 'wife' thing xD
Poor Sora, maybe the nickname shouldn't be used around Riku.

But hmm, I wonder why Riku is bringing Sora around the building. Seems mighty suspicious doesn't it? xD

You know? I have an university friend who works at the library. She's not as cheery and cute as Sora but she's in a similar situation as him xD She has this guy who continuously ask her really obvious questions: "How do I save my files on my USB?" "How do I open the files from USB?" Stuff that you would assume someone at university should know how to do. Or sometimes, he'll just talk to her, randomly. There's also a new security guard that my friend befriended, though she's female in this case.
But the situation was sort of similar that when she told me, I laughed. I wonder if that guy will ask her out, it seemed like he was interested and was just too shy. Just like I wonder if Axel will eventually ask Sora out xD

My favourite part of the chapter:
Don’t seem overeager. Don’t seem overeager. Don’t seem overeager.
“YES!” he blurted and gleefully flung his arms around the taller boy’s torso.
Damn.
Hehe, Sora's just so cute! I love how opened and impulsive he can be. Just like a little child.
Oh and telling Riku that he's cold so he can maybe wear something of his. Sora's fallen hard. Really, really hard.

But yeah, I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to see what happens next! I really like how there's humour mixed in with some serious parts, like at the end of the chapter. Good work! Keep it up!
Cheshire
2009-04-26 . chapter 3
Oh, I love you too. Though I think you nearly killed me. Seriously, dude, it's like 10 pm and I had to plug my mouth and nose to keep from waking up my family. 'BRAIN, MEET MOUTH. TRY TO GET ALONG, OKAY?' Yeah, wow. Words that describe my every other thought.

But yeah, I haven't really seen any Riku-and-Sora-meet-up-in-another-life fics out there. Maybe you'll start a trend?

Anyways, honey bunches of oats, please keep writing. I WAIT ANXIOUSLY FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. No pressure, or anything.
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Seriously, no pressure.
1-Love-Me-Deadly-2
2009-04-26 . chapter 3
OMG-okay, that was stupid to start with...ANYWAY, dude, this fic is cool! Gosh, I never thought of making a fic with Sora and Riku in the next life-so you're on my awsome list for doing this! Yeah, if it's still being written, yo, I'd love to read the next chapter when it's up! XD
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