|Reviews for A good and a bad message|
| penny4him 5/3/11 . chapter 1
Oh the angst! So sad! You really draw the reader in to the emotions and thoughts that each is having.
| silverflight8 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Slightly confusing at the end...Frank is actually sterile, so a child would be out of the question. I'm assuming this is Claire and Frank...
Use different sentences: don't just use simple ones-those are good for making an impact, but too many makes the 'flow' sort of raggedy. (Simple sentence: subject predicate); use sentences with and/or/but and conjunctions.
Otherwise, quite interesting.