Loved it! Paul/Mellie is one of my favourite pairings. *sighs* So, anyways, I loved, loved, loved this ficlet. You wrote the character of Paul really well, btw. :D :D :D Thanks for this! Now I am totally even more excited about tomorrow's episode! :D :D :D

Love all these ficlets so much! :D :D :D They're totally awesome, very descriptive and emotional, especially the Topher one with him in Epitaph One. That episode was brilliant, but so sad when you saw what he became. I would like to see a ficlet on Paul/Mellie's relationship... or one with Victor/Sierra... or a Whiskey one. Great work so far! :D :D :D

P.S. I love your icon :D :D :D "Medicinal carrots!" LOL.

Gonna note this upfront: haven't seen "Epitaph One" yet, since I haven't got my hands on the S1 boxset :(

Still loved this ficlet to pieces, in that it conjures some mighty powerful imagery that definitely makes me wanna see said episode like super bad ;D

Your next chapter should be about Victor's crush on Sierra.

cool story.

Cool! I would love to read more! Dollhouse is awesome so far and I'm glad that there are fan-fics up for it!!

Wonderful story! I'm really enjoying this show, and this really sounds like Echo! ♥