Wow, these are really good :)

I am really liking this collection of stories.
You write really well :D

I hope you continue on with it :)

Story: 8.5/10. In general, I like these little vignettes. I think that you do a good job with most of the prompts and I especially like how you sometimes reiterate the prompt several times, like in the vase one where you keep bringing up vases. I kind of think that sometimes you could use a little more setup or exposition -- it is like you are so intent on it being a certain length that you don't have everything in there that quite needs to be in there.

Characters: 8/10. Some of the pairings are a bit of a stretch for such short ficlets. When it's two people who I've barely seen interact, it is hard to get into their motivations and reasonings for feeling the way that they do. I think that you are actually improving at pulling it off, though. I liked the last two the best, 5 partly because it actually showed the two characters meeting and 6 partly because there is already a lot of history between the two characters.

Creativity: 8.75/10. In general, I think that you utilize the prompts in original ways and many of the pairings are certainly unique.

Writing: 9.25/10. I think that your writing style is very beautiful and effective and the present tense works well for this fic, giving that sense of being in the moment.

Believability: 8/10. Most of the events seem like things that could really happen except for, like I said, some of the couples seem like a bit of a stretch. I think that if you'd used a few more words for some of the scenes, then it wouldn't be an issue.

Overall: 8.5/10. Very well written, daring fic. I think that when you are writing new scenes about characters that don't have canon interaction, that short length can become an issue and you pull it off with some better than others.

I like this one ... I like the possibility it gives that the vampire relationships change, when in the books they are portrayed as so ridiculously (to my mind) constant. I liked the Bella/Jasper a lot, too.

Poor Alice. Argh, I do that all the time, but I don't have the patience to redo it. Great job.

Excellent job on this one.

Oh, I love Leah/Mike :D And this is a lovely little drabble about them. You wove the vase theme in nicely, and it's believably in-character. Awesome job :)

Every single pairing you have is realistic, and even if it's the most random, I'm still saying wow at the end. Keep going, great job, and I can't wait for more!

Wow. Great idea for a pairing! Superbly written and fantastic as usual.

Yay - Leah/Mike I've always wanted to find that pairing!!

Ironic, yes. Very nice story. I like your stories.

i really like this.
it's different and i can't wait to see which pairing you decide to do next.

awesome X

Very good descriptive next. Nice chapter. I'm really enjoying this.

Fantastic chapter!

I love Leah's character. She was so messed over. I'm happy she's found someone. Excellent.
Love,
Rita