Aw!! T T Such a sad story... ; ;

Anyhoo... Good insight from Hud; you really get a feeling for how everyone, especially him, is taking Marlena's death considering we didn't much, if any, mouring in the movie.

Loved the little conversaiton between Hud and Marlena from the movie, it made me laugh a bit for some reaosn x3

Overall, great story and keep up the good work! :D

That was good. It captured the raw emotion that was missed in that scene. Great job. You should write more.

Poor Hud! I really enjoyed reading this. I think you did a great job in capturing the emotions and physical aspects of what he must've felt.

Hey-- Hud/Marlena love. I also think that they were getting close to the point where if either of them survived, they would have become a couple. The scene immediately preceding this fic was the most heartbreaking in the whole movie, I think (ah, forget Rob and Beth!).

Tiny extract that I really liked: "...screaming for him, not asking for help, just his name". Good piece.

I love this oneshot; I really felt for Hud when she died.