Holy Crap! I'm not the only person who's played MG2SS?

That's actually pretty awesome. I like that its short and to the point, accurate to the events of the game, and rational thought for somebody about to take a jump Snake's about to take. I know I'd crap my pants if I had to hang-glide over a broken bridge.

I like. :D

Wow, that was surprisingly well written. Good job. I love how you word what's going on through his head. His frustration is easily followed especially with the comparison to "A child could do this-"

Excellent work. It has intrigued me enough to check and see if you have any other stories for my enjoyment.

-Suadela

Not bad. Very nice look into Young Solid Snake. Love the line about the Escape from New York.