It was a good story, though I think you spent too much time on the battle and not the overall story

Hey, it's me. Sorry for not reviewing sooner...my stupid computer keeps freezing up. I seriously gotta talk to my dad about getting a new one. _

But hey, great one-shot! I like how you portrayed Andrew in this one. In any of the fics I read, he's either gay or an asshole. XD But he did a good job as Red Ranger.

TTYL,

-CJ

I like how you showed that Andrew did really care for Mack, I've read other stories and they make Andrew seem really heartless, so I'm glad you showed that he's not.

That was an interesting thought, a 'what if', I like how you did it. His reactions, all of thiers, were really good and right on. Great job.

good chapter & more please