i loved it

Sweet.

A perfect little moment.

Pure awsomeness!

Such a adorable fic, i just loved the end.

A bit cleche, but all the same it was very well done. It never occoured to me that she could become afraid of swimming due to that incident. Its very possable, and due to Aelita's nature of...clingeness, or well, to be more accurate, her dependency on others, it would also make sense for her to fear for them, and that they could help her fight off that fear.

Very well done. Nice mix of mental conflect, fluff, drama, and a hint or two of humor.

I'm counting down the days to april first! I cant wait to see what you two are cooking up this time!

Oh, and, is ther going to be a set of trivia questions for a sneak peak by any chance like last time? I actually have a profile this time around. (used to be annon AeltJerFan)

Keep up the good work, I cant wait to read your next fic!

Till next time, Ja Ne!

A nice Jeremie/Aelita moment.

You always wonder how the characters really react to their life-threatening situations. I mean, Aelita has been face-to-face with the Reaper more times than any other person her age. I think you caught how Jeremie would handle it very well. I think that you accurately reflected the degree of trust between them too.

If you want a challenge, write a story of what happened when Ulrich found Yumi after a RttP prevented her vaporisation by a laser satellite with only a few billionths of a second to spare. Yumi is tough, but I can't imagine it could get closer than that one.

BenRG's Rating: 7/10

Nice, good and fluffy, well written, basically another great piece of work! Keep it up! Write another chapter... like NOW... Go on, write!
You aren't writing... why not? You should be writing so I can read more... WRITE!
~Artemis Fowl II After Coffee~

Yay working reviews.

Rena, this? Is so adorable. And the fact that it takes place in a pool did not pass me by. You make Aelita and Jeremy so cute and cuddly, you know this? 'snuggles' Love it, and you.

Bunches.

AW!

soo cute!! :D
okay, i had to google the title because i didnt know what it meant and i believe it is an absolute perfect fit for the fic!

Isolophobia, cuz really, who wants to be alone? :)

...so sweet my almost-cavities developed into cavities. ::grin:: At the beginning I rather wanted to hit Jer in the head with a flip-flop but it was sweet and she did need to face her fear and get back in the water. Good job Emu, and it's fine about the title. Glad to be of service even.