Yay. Prologue. I love Sirius. Thank you for writing this.

I adored it! It seems like it's going to be just as great as the others.
Update soon, please!

i'm loving it so far. i've all the unbroken universe and i am completely in love with it and i was very happy to find a prequel!
please, update soon!
100/10

I liked it!!

Your Promise stories are excellant. Please write more Harry Potter stories when you find the time. Are you still in the navy? A couple of authors found my small reviews rather too much so I don't write too many reviews any more; but if I find stories really great I sometimes say so.

great! can't wait for more!

i am so excited to read yet another instalment in my favorite fan fic series... its going amazing,well if u could add sirius' flying motor bike, it wasnt there in any other parts, but that was understandable because it must have been lost when he was captured, but in this part he ought to be given his bike

Oh, that's just cruel! Writing a sequel/prequel or whatever you might like to call it and then not update for months! Do you enjoy making people suffer? Hmm, judging by Promises mistaken, you do, actually, but that's hardly the point now. Love your stories, the mixture of humour and darkness, and of course it also helps that your main character is my favourite...You should really have someone check the french, it's escargot flambé, for example, but other than that and a couple of grammar mistakes (your/you're and so on)that it takes a real nerd like myself to notice, you are a brilliant writer, albeit a rather slow one

Who! You sure take us on a roller coaster ride!


Brilliant, can't wait for more.
Amazing quality, beautiful content, stunning imagination.

Adios!

Ooh, I loved that it was Harry! That got me completely by surprise, although I should've examined the ages and dates more carefully. :)
The UU is by FAR the best piece of fanfiction I've ever read. Bar none. And I'm so happy you're continuing it. :D

Sorry, I'm still a little confused on the time frame of the entire story. Is this a prologue to the Unbroken Universe? If it is, I'm still having a little trouble understanding the time frame of the story... There are bits such as the mention of Avalon that keeps throwing me off track.

I've read the rest of your "Promises" universe this week, and was throughly pleased with it and surprised by it by turns.

I'm looking forward very much to seeing how they ended up in the situation they ended up in.

One thing that stands out in particular is that - much in the vein of shouting "Don't run up the STAIRS!" at horror film characters - were my wistful what-might-have-beens about Harry Potter's original premise. This is an EXCELLENT just-change-one-thing; Sirius as the secret keeper ends up being so much better for the characters we love, and so much worse, in many ways, overall. Instead of two (relatively short, in comparision) wars, the war dragged on for over two decades, with all that that entails. It's excellent food for thought.

Ah, this one looks just as promising as your other ones :D Is he going to be found in the next chapter? I want to know what happens!

How long is this one going to be? As long as the others, or not quite? Also, you've probably answered this, but how far into the universe does this go? Until he escapes (from his PoV) or what?

I can't wait to read more!

--MLMS

Love it so far! Thanks for keeping it up, Robin! I've followed this story from the beginning, and it has never lost my complete attention! :-)

Awesome!! Update soon!! ;)