It's nice to read Jasper and Bella now that I know their ties. It's a fun way to reminisce that bond. I love their connection, for both of them. I think it was great that they could share that with each other, and it really perpetuates that whole thought of "natural and instincts", which actually plays multiple roles in their lives now. I love that.

I love Jasper talking about Alice. I love that Bella's choice to join them, gives them new perspectives on their lives.

Love their conversation about her power. But, then I love your version of her power. The fact that so many of them are "broken" and yet they are so resilient is fascinating. It just proves that the strongest among us can have broken souls, and they thought they didn't have souls. I find it interesting that Bella asked if he and Esme were broken. I actually see why she would, since she felt the most from them, and I can understand how they may be more broken than the rest, of course besides Edward. I'm not sure I'm making sense. But, I really did enjoy this time with the cowboy and Bella.

But, of course I really love how Edward can hardly handle it when they are apart. I loved the line about the shorts...so funny. I can totes see his face with that one.

Playing her body like the piano...ung...love it. Like seriously wen I was re-reading this for the tribute I've been putting stars next to the places I want to highlight...and I am telling you that 7, 8, and 9 had a star next to every paragraph...LOL. It was so good. I loved the 3 fingers and the flattery..unghh again. Yes, star star star star...I'm completely yours...that is all.

xo
Sherry

Love Bella's relationship with Jasper!

The lemon was just perfect!

I agree with Esme, she is adorable:)

Their talk about her gift was fascinating!Such an interesting idea!But if she will project other peoples broken bones and the like in full force onto herself...then Poor Bella...what happens then when she see a dying person!

Extremely interesting story!:)

It is amazing, how you managed to changed the plot so much and it still feels like the Edward and Bella that we all know from the Twilight books!

Loved it!

Really enjoyed family interactions. Wonder what they all were thinking when they saw her, apart from that she looks like a goddess. Also very interesting what is going on between Bella and Jasper, why she feels different about him then the others...looking forward to find out about that in the next chapters...

Your writing is amazing!I smile constantly while reading this story. It really is a joy to read this fiction:)Thank you!

lovely:)

So beautifully described! And you already caught my full attention!What about her eyes?!Gonna find out...

I wanted to apologize for not reviewing properly when I first read your stories. LYLS and ALE are 2 of my favorites and I've read them so many times, I feel like I could recite them.

Thank you a million times over for writing and sharing them with us.

Hooray to Jacob imprinting! Makes me wonder if they're showing up in the sequel since Angela was going to transfer.

Love love love the silly boy banter.

Great chapter!

I absolutely LOVED this story ! I really feel like this should have been breaking dawn and I love it more than stephenie meyers version. you are very talented ! please keep up the good work !

Dear Lola,
I just spent the last couple of days re-reading this story and I don't think I have enough words in me to properly praise you. This story is the best piece of fanfiction that I have ever read and that's saying a lot.
Every single aspect of it is sheer perfection. The suspense, humor, lovedays, lemons. Everything!
Thank you so much for writing for us. I know how much time you must put into it and am eternally greatful for it. You let us escape into Edward and Bella's world so effortlessly that I never want to leave.
I cannot wait to read your next stories and you will have a devoted fan in me forever. Thank you!

So many good parts of this chapter, I don't even know where to start.

Favorite line: “Edward, can I drive the Vanquish to Mexico?”

Dear Lola shoes,
WOW..Ive been waiting for months for you to re post LYLS & ALE and I'm NOT disappointed. I've enjoyed yur stories... sat at the computer countless nights until 2am and ignored the kids - yes i work full time...oh i've enjoyed this so much. Thank you for allowing me a Twi AU to linger in a little longer.
loving your awesomeness.
xoxo

Alice is a lot of fun. Of course she would be a teacher at the class.
Jasper and Edward's plan was hilarious.
Great chapter!

The cooking class scene was cute. I love Edward's running commentary in reaction to Mike.

Love love love that Edward lost the bet...

Favorite line: “Alice! You’re getting another Porsche!”