I agree with Aeris. I don't see any OOCness. It's rather believable and beautifully written at that. I love it. =]

i like it pls countinue thanks

I see no OOC here; somehow or another, I have a feeling the manga will end with a reconciliation between the two, whether or not romantic in nature is a different topic alltogether.

Regardless, this is a lovely little piece and a pretty telling insight into the characters (especially Anotsu here who's made of shades of grey, like how the manga portrayed him). Looks forward for more Anotsu/Rin from you! XD

Nicely done. I enjoyed their time together myself and this idea just kinda fits for a possible outcome to their entwined lives. Thanks for sharing.