Beautifully set, amazingly written. What more could a reader/reviewer ask for? Well Done!
Kamai6

this is so so so amazing..i loved it :-)

:D
LOVE IT!

This was really nice. The writing was superb, and it reminded me of the way that I've always wanted to be able to write.I really enjoyed how to added the element of rain. Rain has always seemed like something really creative and somewhat somber whebn authors include it in their stories. I'm also pretty glad that you still seemed to include the banner between Lily and James. It's an important element in any LJ fic.

Good job.

~Katie

P.S. I just thought that I'd let you know it's listed under Lily Luna P. I know it's a real pain to go change the selected character (I had to go through all of my stories and change them to Lily Evans P.) Sometimes I wish that Harry had been more original with the names for his children. Just thought I'd let you know.

This was really beautiful and sweet. It's good to see that Lily and James aren't perfect together, that they didn't suddenly lose their incompatibilities because they started dating. Awesome.

< 3 Keep up the good work.

Ok, so of your stories in my inbox today, this is so far my favorite. Wow. Maybe because that's like, my ideal romantic, the kinda messed up relationship that patches itself during the rain. Weird, but that was a perfect story for me right now.
Totally amazing.
-k

I really am enjoying the way you portray Lily and James. And the last line was great.

this story is soo beautiful

i.am.crying.
THAT WAS SO SWEEt!
omg I had butterflies and than I was smiling and then I was like crying. THAT WAS SO SWEET! AH I'm gonna go read it over! well done!

Short and to the point, I liked it. Just as I always do with your writing.

I liked this a lot, really. Good job!

That was so beautiful. The imagery and metaphors at the beginning were absolutely stunning. I truly loved reading this. It was very graceful and solemn. Excellent job. Keep writing!

It's a nice slow read. Very calming actually.

I love the way you describe the rain, and the formal witty banter that passed between the two of them before James apologized.
I also love how you describe James in all of your stories, it's just done so well!
You make him the perfect guy, especially because of all him imperfections (if that makes sense?)

Hope you add more stories soon!

awwh that was cute. =]

amazing!! i thought they were still not together at the beginning !! very cool!! im so like Lily in this sotyr, love watching the rain ! very calming or disorienting!!

please continue writing amazing stories,

Lilia !~!