is this also posted on a teaspoon and an open mind? because i'm sure i've seen the whole thing there... very good fic, and an interesting explanation for the valeyard.

Ek! Oh, noes!

You know, you should really consider updating this here. It's rather difficult to corrupt my intern to your stories and crazy theories when I have to go through all the extra effort of finding the link to your Teaspoon account where you HAVE finished posting. Just a thought.

And of course, since this story is FANTASTIC, it would be great for you to finish it so everyone else knows that too.

Oh-my-fucking-golly-wow-bananas! He hit her!

As always, love your writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the real Doctor can do something about it. I love how you capture Rose's character.

That was whoa u totally have to continue its getting amazing.
Maria

Please update soon as I am enjoying the story.

Arrgh. Bastard.

Oh, am curious to see what happens.

Oh, interesting premise... but then, yours always are...

Oh man, I love it when authors you loved in old fandoms pick up the same new fandoms you do. I was a huge fan of your UU series, so I am super excited to see that Doctor Who (and ten/rose in particular) is your new fandom of choice :) Love the premise of this story and the characterization of the Valeyard and Rose. I can't wait to see where it goes!

winter's rose said you updated, and that lifted up a crappy day, so thx. the description of the almost finished tardis is so cool. i could really see it in my head. i like how you make the tardis seem so alife and all like they always hint at in the show. you never see that too well in other fics.

the valeyard finally admitted that he's really not the doctor. that's got to be scary for rose. but then he's gonna erase her memory! i hope the real doctor comes to save the day. that would be awesome.

this is a really long review, huh? i wish i could write like you, but my english sucks. i hope you update soon coz i've got to know what happens next!

Ohmigod. He can't! He just can't!

He *hit* her? He's going to mess about in her head? What's he going to make her think, that he's the Doctor? Can he even *do* that?

You're so awful, but I have to keep reading. Is it bad if I like awful people? I love your writing either way.

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Winter's Rose

She's not fooled. I know it, because she can't be fooled. Can she? She was finally starting to see the evil, he even *said* he's evil.

I guess we see what we want to see, or what we need to see. Rose is so human here.

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Winter's Rose

ooh... creepy. Fantastic story!

OOH, evil, evil, evil! What's he gonna do to Rose? Make her forget his odd behavior and go back to acting? Or is she going to be brainwashed into going along with his schemes? Do update soon, won't you? :)