I really liked the way Sherry was portrayed in this chapter. She seemed really in character with her video game counterpart.

I feel your pain on the writer's block thing. D:

Seriously though, the detail is just superb. I'm a fan of survival stories myself and I sure wish, truly, that this was canon. I haven't played RE2 yet, though I do have an overview for the game and I could really imagine the events occurring in the story. I will be waiting for the next chapter, update soon! :)

Another great chapter. Great job getting into Sherry's head when she makes some decisions based on questionable 12 year old logic.

You know one thing that I really like about your writing? When you're describing the monsters you always provide good detail without it sounding cheesy. That's one thing that really annoys me when reading horror fiction. Just a random compliment I thought I would throw in there :) I liked how towards the end Sherry was pining for her parents, which reflects that she is still a 12 year old girl. Hopefully next chapter we'll see more of Claire! It was worth the wait.

Holy crap, that was good! I love how you managed to explain little details in the game- like the candy wrappers on the desk or why there were zombies locked inside the RPD. The characters were also very well expressed. The scene between Irons and the mayor's daughter blew me away. c: You HAVE to update this! Please?

I can see why you changed the rating to be safe and all. It sure sucks Sherry had to see all that but at least she missed the first part. Eagerly awaiting for her to meet Claire.

Wow, i've been waiting for this! ^__^
Ad it all makes perfect sense, considering what a sicko Irons was, and what he really could do if there wasnt any censore in the game. You pictured the bastard so realistically, that I just can't hate him enough!! Poor girl, tortured and dying in the hands of THIS... It's even worse than becoming a zombie.
Sherry must have been scarred for life after seeing this.
And the fact that she DID see this makes perfect sence in correspondence to the game - why else would she ear a definitely living human enterung the room fhere she hid?

Awesome chapter, thank you very much!
Can't wait for the next one)

Good luck!

Irons was always an insane freak in my mind, and you somehow made him seem even more so. You really have a nack for recreating the characters and events from the game. Can't wait 'til they get to the sewer and the really cool stuff happens. Hope to see you at that point soon. For now though, good-bye.

That chapter was fantastic. Getting into the thick of it now, aren't you? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Well that was a nice change of pace. I'm glad you put in that scene with Chief Irons and the mayor's daughter. It wasn't too bad as far as disturbia goes. But it was actually kinda sad, just the way that happened with her. But you did a good job with it, I was absorbed in the moment. I wonder who came into the room at the end. I have some ideas ;)

Another awesome chapter. I don't mind the change from T to M, I believe the parts about Irons does make sense and add to the dramatic effect of the story. Hope you'll update soon.

I love how you included the S.T.A.R.S. office in this chapter. And how you described the rush and shuffle of the room, and even the graffiti on Wesker's desk because someone would totally do that. At first I wondered who the police officer at the end of it was and then I realized it. Slow moment on my part.
Anyways can't wait to read more from you!

I had meant to review this earlier but got sidetracked. It's a very good fic, keep up the good work.

Please accept my grattitude and deepest respect, lady Indigo Siren! This story is one of the most enjoyable and, I daresay, addictive examples of fanfiction I ever read.
In terms of style stability and absense of excessive pathos it leaves SD Perry's official novels far behind.
Please forgive my spelling, my native language is Russian.
Best of luck to you, acompanied vith undying creativity.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter most impatiently.

Sincerely yours, ladymanticore.

The way how you detail each and every room and her thoughts is awesome, I'll definitely wait for more chapters.