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| Drunkenchicken94 2006-08-13 ch 18, anon. | abuseHurry up and update... you haven't updated in 3 yearss! |
| neet 2005-06-30 ch 18, anon. | abuseplease keep going it's getting sappy! |
| Kenny 2003-09-02 ch 18, anon. | abuseCool plot, nice work with the different point of views. Keep on writting |
| lila 2003-09-01 ch 18, anon. | abuseyo wasup lila again good good stuff LOONGEERR aight then itll be betta |
| take advice from someone wh... 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseu better make this longer hun. I like the idea but it has to be longer. and u really gots to understand that people ain't gonna read something that takes long to complete until its worth it. im the first reviewer again. dun |
| Shadow Scythe2 2003-07-25 ch 17,  | abuseThis story is great!I like every bit of it. However if one the guys gets Kari in the end try to make sure the other guy is happy too. |
| miaow227 2003-07-16 ch 17, | abuseHey this is so cool! You have to carry on. |
| itdoesntmatter 2003-07-14 ch 17, anon. | abusethis is great but make it longer. it's too short. you should write at least 10 words a chapter. |
| ?????? 2003-04-20 ch 16, anon. | abuseNice. Please finish the story. Side note: I would like it if TK and Kari kissed at the end (because I love incredibly sappy romantic endings though anything else you do will be just fine). |
| Avalonia 2003-04-17 ch 16, | abuseNice. Very nice. Please continue. And Soon |
| the real rika 2003-04-16 ch 12, | abusevery nice story your writing ability is great and i wish i could be a great writer like you! could you take a look at my story Rika's Discovery. It's my first ever story on fanfiction.net and i was wondering if you could give me some tips on being a great writer? thanx the real rika |
| Lila 2003-04-16 ch 16, anon. | abuse1st person to review your latest chapter. really good! YOU MUST CONTINUE! FAST! |
| Avalonia 2003-01-12 ch 4, | abuseConfused. T.K. said he had alot of homework. He stopped off at the flower shop. Kari asked him if he wanted to go out, how did T.K. lie? |
| Krylancelo 2003-01-04 ch 14, | abuseNice. Poor Kari and I New old man guy is L's brother right? Bye!!1 |
| Mastero 2002-12-14 ch 2, | abuseInteresting story. Itlooks like Davis is the one who is going to leave empty-handed and heartbroken. |