I loved it. The parts in italics were a great little underlining theme to the whole thing. :)

VERY nice. I loved the music parable and the description of the fight. As someone who cannot write a fighting scene, I have a deep appreciation for someone who can do it as well as you do. Great job, really. :-)

This was just what I needed right after completing a big school project. A nicely framed little moment in time with two of my favourite characters interacting and very much in-character. Good job.

i like that! :) Very unique, a fantastic piece of work.