 Rukichigo93 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Poor Thalia TT
love ur story |
 Ah Young Half Blood Love 2009-06-19 . chapter 1Short and sweet.Just the way I like it.Really good. |
 Sophia Anya Lee 2009-04-01 . chapter 1That was ... deep. A really wonderful insight into Thalia's mind. |
 toffeecakesxox. 2009-03-28 . chapter 1ohmygod.
CrayolaMarkers wasn't kidding when she said this oneshot was angsty & sad & tear-jerking.
*wipes tears*
perfectly awesome.
:D
-toffeecakesxox. |
 CrayolaMarkers 2009-03-05 . chapter 1Oh, wow...why haven't I reviewed this yet?!
Anyway. I love how deep, how true to form Thalia is here...and omigoodness you're talented with imagery. I can exactly picture Luke's eyes, and besides, this fic makes me really, really sad, like I'm starting to miss Luke. You added, like, eighteen layers to Thalia's personality.
AWESOME. POSSUM. JOB.
xoxo
Mer Bear |
 Broken Gold 2009-03-02 . chapter 1So well done! I loved it! Thalia was very IC, which can be hard to do sometimes. |
 MelancholiclyCreepy 2009-02-28 . chapter 1Deep dude... |
 Kaoru-Hime 2009-02-26 . chapter 1Wow, I have to agree with the other reviewers, you did a great job of capturing Thalia's character.
Don't mind my immaturity when I say that Luke needs to get a life. Or maybe it's Kronos that needs one.
You're writing in this fic is missing something to me. I'm not sure what, unfortunately, but it seems like something isn't there.
Overall, lovely work from Kata-chan. |
 dnrl 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Absolutely stunning. Great capture of Thalia - I love the insight into her character. |
 believeinthegods 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Beautiful, beautiful story. Excellent pacing, brilliant character empathy, lovely writing style that added to a really sweet piece.
A lot of authors try to add too much into a short story, thinking it has to be all about the action, but I love how yours happened in just a moment, and came across so beautifully. Loved it.
Love,
believeinthegods
xx |
 Caramel Kryptonite 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Aww, poor Thalia. I love Thuke, and this was an awesome one shot! |
 percabeth777 2009-02-24 . chapter 1Short but deep! I loved it! It captured Thalia pretty well. |