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Reviews for: Don't Look Back
Rukichigo93
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Poor Thalia TT
love ur story
Ah Young Half Blood Love
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
Short and sweet.Just the way I like it.Really good.
Sophia Anya Lee
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
That was ... deep. A really wonderful insight into Thalia's mind.
toffeecakesxox.
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
ohmygod.
CrayolaMarkers wasn't kidding when she said this oneshot was angsty & sad & tear-jerking.
*wipes tears*
perfectly awesome.
:D

-toffeecakesxox.
CrayolaMarkers
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Oh, wow...why haven't I reviewed this yet?!

Anyway. I love how deep, how true to form Thalia is here...and omigoodness you're talented with imagery. I can exactly picture Luke's eyes, and besides, this fic makes me really, really sad, like I'm starting to miss Luke. You added, like, eighteen layers to Thalia's personality.

AWESOME. POSSUM. JOB.

xoxo
Mer Bear
Broken Gold
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
So well done! I loved it! Thalia was very IC, which can be hard to do sometimes.
MelancholiclyCreepy
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Deep dude...
Kaoru-Hime
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
Wow, I have to agree with the other reviewers, you did a great job of capturing Thalia's character.
Don't mind my immaturity when I say that Luke needs to get a life. Or maybe it's Kronos that needs one.
You're writing in this fic is missing something to me. I'm not sure what, unfortunately, but it seems like something isn't there.
Overall, lovely work from Kata-chan.
dnrl
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Absolutely stunning. Great capture of Thalia - I love the insight into her character.
believeinthegods
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Beautiful, beautiful story. Excellent pacing, brilliant character empathy, lovely writing style that added to a really sweet piece.
A lot of authors try to add too much into a short story, thinking it has to be all about the action, but I love how yours happened in just a moment, and came across so beautifully. Loved it.
Love,
believeinthegods
xx
Caramel Kryptonite
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Aww, poor Thalia. I love Thuke, and this was an awesome one shot!
percabeth777
2009-02-24 . chapter 1
Short but deep! I loved it! It captured Thalia pretty well.
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