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Oh, finally the third chapter!
You added a new mistery, the I.S.S., and that's a clever idea. Loving the way it remerber a lot of the company ;-) (Great the mode how you pur "one of us, one of them" into this too). And Noah Bennet is always the boss in the shadows XD I miss him in that way, and you made him perfect! Along with Claude, of course: the two of them again together! That's great.
Gabriel Gray playing a lord who bought his nobility in absoluty IC, it's perfect for him. And I'm a Syelle, so I'm very happy reading their scene ^^ Elle as a nun is a little strange for me, but I think it works. And Linderman too, with a secret plan! Yes, I'm very happy now! :) I wonder if Bob and Adam will join that...
Maybe the part about Othello is a little longer, but I likes the Agnes and Claire scene :P Cute. So Mohinder is Sylar's new target? So seems, or maybe you're just trick us? I can't wait for the next chapter, so may thing to discover... What are Sylar and Linderman doing? Why could the Petrelli be a problem for them? And what is the really meaning of I.S.S.? Oh, it's so exciting... Great job, you're amazing.

LOVED the whole forbidden Syelle thing. Augh, you totally hinted it with the he-hasn't-gotten-hitched-yet thing, but I was like "Dang it, there's no Elle and he's stalking this other chick." And THEN Elle appeared as a nun. A nun! Then I knew.
Okay, Mohinder is a genius for knowing about lead based paint.
Those are my two major comments, but rest assured that everything else varied between good and awesome.
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wow...a great fic has turn into a mystery now

love that Gabe is a Lord, killer and a assasin

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sry it took me so long to review this

i love how everyonme has a character to play

Hiro an advisor to the Emperor and Peter a doctor,

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Claude as Iago! And I see you are a Mayhinder fan? This chapter had the air of a Victorian English adventure story. It was super fun to read, despite the considerable length. Update soon please!

Very good! I only have one criticism, and it's really nit-picky: the name 'Sylar' is actually based on the German word for scholar. If you don't believe me, check the Heroes Wiki page on Sylar, trivia section.
Mohinder's and Peter's school sounds like it would make a great fic of its own. Update soon! I'm off to read chapter 2.

I'm so glad I cam across this story, I think it's a great concept to set Heroes in Victorian England which was a great period of history.

I was just wondering whether the characters will have powers and whether there will be romances in the future?

I love that you've included so many of the great characters from season 1 (who I think should still be in it) and the plotline too cause everything fits in nicely. I can't wait to hear how Othello went and I'm really enjoying this story so please update as soon as possible:)

Master stroke! Great story so far! I'm intrigued by the whole "period" aspect to it! I love it! And I absolutely loved Claude's entrance. "You're Iago! Not the invisible man!" LOL!

Please continue writing. You're doing such a great job!

What an amazing story! Wonderful! It's very difficult write an AU with people IC, but you did it very weel! It's a pleasure reading about our chatachters in that way. I really love Peter as the shy doctor trapped in his brother's pubblic life, and more I love his "being-a-little-like-Holmes" (that I adore), along with Mohinder. I really hope the will be partner againg hunting Sylar, who is always fascinated. Claire's part with Jaqueline was funny (and you put her storyline in a pretty good way, being Nathan's daughter and all), but the idea abount Mohinder playing Othello was great! XD I laughed so much! And Noah is the same Noah!
I guess Linderman will show up as the one who want kill the queen, maybe. And I wonder if they will have abilities or not... It will be great in either way!
I'm a little disappointed you received so few reviews... I hope you'll keep writing!
P.s. I apologizes, my english is not so good. I hope the reviews was enought clear ^^

Hooray! You updated.

There's something I'm wondering. Will the characters in this story have powers?

love reading the Heroes cast in the another century

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This story is, in an of itself, a really interesting premise, but what I really love?

You mentioned Torchwood! I saw that line and, almost literally, flailed. That is just kind of fantastic.
*hopes for a Doctor appearance, maybe?*
*also suspects Jack was in Torchwood by this time*

The characters are fascinating, and I can hardly wait to see how it will continue (and who else will show up).