Why did you kill him if he was your favorite character an less you are going to bring him back.

What! NOOOOOOOOOO!

:c

AGHHHHH WHY U KILL VAATI? *sobs in a dark corner*

Um, ok, how to say this. one of the best and sadest fics I've ever read. I have a HUGE obsession with vaati, and i totally loved this story, it was so good. please write more.

love it.

This is really good. I liked it, though I rather happy endings :P Anyways it's very well written. Hope you write more awesome stuff like this :D

omigod this is so sad. :( It actually almost made me cry. this is horribly awesome, if you know what im saying. /:]\ To elaborate, I loved this, but I hated it. I just, the death, the way he died, why, where. omigosh.

It was a little sad, and a little short, but I liked it. I like this particular portrayal of Vaati, too, as sort of regretting what he did. I'm hoping to write a Minish Cap fanfic in the future, so I'm pulling on as many portrayals as I possibly can.

You were right, that is sad. This is a good piece, I think. No spelling or grammar errors that I saw. Although, maybe next time you could turn "OK" into "okay." Other than that, good job. _