What?? That's it?? But it sounds so good!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Do finish it!

This looks really really really good! I know it's probably been a while since you last thought about this story, but would you mind doing it again? I'm intrigued, and I want to know what's going on with Sarah in your version ofthis world...

Your new devoted reader,
Mickeygee

Finally, a half decent looking S/J story! Very hard to come by, so I congradulate you for catching my interest. :) I've always wanted to write for this fandom but nothing ever comes to mind. Anyways, the story is good so far, very intriguing. I wonder whats in the woods? And I can't wait until you introduce Sarah into this melee. Looks like fun. I'm in for it.

Wow, I just read the Save the Last Dance and was informed of Bethany's origins/the B and J pairing. *I thought it was random that all of a sudden James was engaged to this strange girl. I suppose if you ever do finish Save the Last Dance, it will have a bittersweet ending for S/J, since it is implied that James and Bethany must of really hit it off at the dance to still be together all these years, as presented in this wonderful sequel. I cannot wait for your next update.

I adore Liberty Kids and am fond of stories centering on S/J years later. The beginning is so well-written that I cannot wait to see how the story unravels. I am looking forward to the much anticipated Chapter 4 to see Sarah and how she has changed.

OMG, CLIFFHANGER!! 8D

This is so freaking interesting -- and James' old longing for adventure...totally understandable. NEXT CHAPPY~!! 8D

~PT

AARRGGHH!! A cliff-hanger! Poor James! But my writer's instincts tell me that he will eventually be okay, because he has to marry Sarah--doesn't he? Good chapter, writer!

This is well-thought out -- that's my impression asofar. Update soon? -- it'd be great if you did. Interesting, Sarah and James having a falling out. Add Bethany to the mix -- it's not even known where she came in at the very start.

New York...disappearing people...soldiers... Yup, definitely up for drama. Update soon, if you can ;D

~PT

Oh, please do continue with this, it has great potential! You're off to a briliant start! I'll be waiting!

Finally! This is much better quality than most of the already few stories in this section. I hope you keep it up!

Sounds interesting.

wait... WHERE'S SARAH?! u best make this a sarah/james story or somebody's gonna get mad! JK, but still! what happens next? please update! ;)