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cafemaza
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
This is one of probably the only time when crying during sex is okay.:)

Haha, anyway, I loved this story again, as usual!:)
francetwo
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
Loved it. It was hot, sexy, and conforting. You should continue.
MuffinOnYourFace
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
holy crap. that was freakin amazing. incredibly sad and heartbreaking but so well written and totally awesome.
CarineM
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
great story! it's always very moving when people write about Derek letting his walls fall.
tracyh
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Congratulations on a wonderful fic.

Meredith so wants to help Derek, share with him. It's incredibly moving to see how she gets him in this, in a way no one else does, not even Mark and he's known Derek most of his life.

You got me thinking when Meredith was putting Mark in his place. He, of all people, should have seen Derek was upset in the hospital, instead he was wrapped up in what he wanted. I can see how Derek would take that, it really is like Addison all over again for him.

My heart just bleeds for Derek. There is something inevitable to me about all of this, his fear of failure, the need to be the good guy, the one in control. It makes reading things like this, where everything he knows and takes strength from is ripped away, all the more poignant.

Well done on such a great fic.
equisetum
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Great story. I love how it's dark and sweet at the same time. Mer's overreaction with Mark was perfect.
eastern.meridian
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Oh my God, it was absolutely brilliant! Hot, intense, emotional WOW! Would like to see you continuing with this but anyway, it was great!
darkandtwisty1
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Morgan!

Omg this was wonderful. You had me crying almost the whole way through. The emotion was written so wonderfully! I just thought it was amazing. Your work continues to amaze me!!
halfbakedsourdough
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Another amazing story, Morgen! I'm not even going to attempt to list what I loved about this one-shot because I would end up quoting the entire story back to you. The whole thing was just beautifully written and perfectly in character as we have come to expect from you. Great job!
MerDerGirl
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
That was beautiful!
k101
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
That was excellent!
MeredithandDerekfanforever
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
I loved it.

Brandy
oulipo19
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
very realistic chapter, I loved it and you really get the characters, I think that's why so many people appreciate your fics so much, you respect the characters Shonda created and doesn't to change them, which some authors do and at some point the readers can't recognize the Derek and Meredith they love in the show. I love these two characters and it's exactly the Mer and Der I love that I can find in your fic so thanks for sharing all this with us. I was a little frustrated last week when they only showed us 10 seconds of that scene. I expected more :)
stefshady
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
awesome!
AmyInJapan
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
hi, thanks for writing. I'm a little curious, in the last mer/der scene they were both drinking scotch or something similar (I thought) but here they are drinking tequila. Anyway it's always nice to see a story with a strong Mer.
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