lol 'courtship' xDDDD very well written sir.

That was great! Couldn't do better myself, nice writing!

Luv from a Mutt.

aw

I liked the idea, but Yuffie seemed out of character. Everyone was too stiff and formal. I think it was a little cliche.

On the whole, though, I liked it!

Hey, I just discovered your story, and I love it! This is actually quality fanfiction, not like most stories on here. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this! I love your style so far-you describe things excellently. Update soon please!

Aww...this was so sad and sweet! I love Yuffetines. It's so wondrous! Like they complete each other, eh? But, my only constructive criticism is: I think that the use of the "f" word is a bit too extreme for a "k or k" story. You might want to up the rating? Ah but good job anyway! (: