I don't even know what to say
Regard that my comment will be as extensive as your pseudo-one-shot tale

this is pretty much why mankind is doomed...because of people like you that only know how to post random weird junk on this heaven-like website.

Regards from your friend Cotonete

Aw, that's so sweet!
An expansion of this would be great! If you don't wan to do it, I already have an idea sprouting in my head! XD Would I have your permission to use this as a base for it?

Short, sweet and to the point. I really like this, I normally don't like short stories like this, but this is just perfect. Keep up the good work.

to me that's like perfectly IC >.< i love it ^^

Its very good for something so short. You could've branched out a bit before posting, though.

Its kinda laughable that the pre-story info takes more space than the story itself. *grins*