 Sammywolfstar 4/4/12 . chapter 1YOU ARE SO DEAD! YOU BETTER HAVE A HAPPY ENDING FOR NARUTO OR YOU WILL FIND YOURSELF IN MY DEMONS BELLY! |
 hippy101 11/6/10 . chapter 1well this isn't a suggestion, because if you must know I have NO IDEA how you should start the next chapter, but just DEFINITELY have a next chapter! DO NOT ABANDON THIS STORY! It is AMAZING! I actually CRIED! |
 koibrown 6/20/10 . chapter 1 you start a good story please be kind and finish it. |
 r 5/28/10 . chapter 1 fuckkk What happens!
need more now! lkjdfdsalk |
 counter-intuitive 11/24/09 . chapter 1Poor Naruto :( Thing is, I know he would sacrifice his own happiness for Sakura and Sasuke |
 Kuro Mitsu 9/10/09 . chapter 1I really love this story, I hope you continue with it! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 Chugga Chugga Choo Choo 5/8/09 . chapter 1Aww, it's beautiful.
Update soon, yeah?
Effy. |
 Jingy5 4/12/09 . chapter 1suggestions suggestion suggestion hm well all i can think of -and it might seem bad- is that since Sasuke will obviously try to be with Naruto eventually it would make sense if he let Sakura kno that yes the only reason i'm with you is because you can give me heirs.. she might cling to that, but she seems fragile and i think that playin back Naruto's words 'I won’t feel sorry for you though Sakura, because in the end I was the best damned thing to happen to you' would hurt her more since she knows that he wont be there for her when she see's that Sasuke doesnt love her |
 rabidnarutofan4lyf 4/11/09 . chapter 1 I am seriously looking forward to an update. I love the way the story is going, and Sakura should DIE, or you could just make her have a miscarriage, and then sasuke will hate her.(I loathe any sasusaku. Just looking at the pairing makes me want to claw my eyes out.)
Please update soon,
Nabbi and Jen xoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
 ceci 3/2/09 . chapter 1 omg when are u gonna update diz is really good so please hurry up! |
 Capt Krull 2/26/09 . chapter 1 Have the kid be stillborn and Sasuke so angry at himself and especially Sakura for driving Naruto away that he refuses to touch her ever again! You need to viciously bring da pain down upon those two for what they did. I mean there is nothing you can do to those two that will be over the top or too severe. Go medieval on their azz's! |
 ecdragon00 2/25/09 . chapter 1Well I got to say the story is pretty good. Now I am not a big fan of the cheating thing, but it kind of softens the blow since it was said in the summary. However I loved the Sasuke gets his A$$ kicked, lol, best part. You have to update soon because I think you have a good story here. Now if you really are looking for suggestions I can give you some but it is up to you to write it or not, I do have a overactive imagination, just cannot write. Now with Sasuke and Sakura they should feel pain somehow in the story, there friends should make them miserable in my opinion. They disserve whatever you can give them. For Narutos part I have to agree that he should leave for awhile, request from the hokage for a long term mission as well as be assigned to a new team if he is still apart of team Kakashi. However instead of Months I think it should be years ( 4-5). I would not want to see my ex-lover pregnant with someone else's kid while they where with me, so years. You have a allot to pick from where he goes to, he helped to saved 2 areas (sand and wave), saved 2 princesses, and a priestess. I think a good place would be whirlpool, his mom land to get to understand her some. You could have some people that escaped from the blood cleansing from Mist (people with blood line limits), where he meets some new "FRIENDS". When he comes back after a couple years he will be more mature, a little more serious, and extremely HOT but still fun loving. He really hates Sasuke and Sakuras guts, really does not want to be in the same room as them. Also this is really up to you but maybe he will come back with a kid or two of his own (TWINS), mother would have past away, that way you could show how good a Dad he is, and Sasuke has to deal with overprotective kids, lol. Maybe you could even give them a blood line limit, I really like Hakus Ice limit (Demon ice twins, lol), from there mother that was increased from there Demon Jailer Dad. You could also use the Kids latter to get them talking again, Sasuke risks his life to save them and even though Naruto loathes Sasuke he would still be grateful. But that is my opinion and some ideas to get you started on the next chapter, it is really up to you for your story. But I hope it will help you some to get the next chapter out. Hope the next chapter will come out soon. |
 LovelySinner7 2/25/09 . chapter 1Omg! This was good! Please continue! Sakura... i HATE HER! FOR BEONG SO STUPID..SASUKE..I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE! |
 SuzyQ 2/25/09 . chapter 1 Sakura needs to have a miscarriage through some accident that will prevent her from ever having kids again. Then when Sasuke treats her like garbage because she's no longer of any use to him. She will then understand the depths of her foolish choice and the pain she caused Naruto. |
 Longbow 2/25/09 . chapter 1 If you want this story to be a success, you need to have Sasuke and Sakura experience great heartache and pain for what they have done. Anything less, and all you've succeeded in doing is making Naruto look like a wuss. |