You are the most brilliant f*cking writer I have ever had the pleasure of discovering on . Seriously. I went through all your KH fics in a day and they're all beautifully written, but I keep coming back to this one. You have a real talent for capturing subtle and intimate moments and your dialogues are absolutely brilliant. Your writings are profound, thought-provoking, bittersweet and in a sense deeply poetic. I love how straightforward your writing is and the fact that you write in present tense seems to give the words some added potency.
I am totally hooked. Gawd. You have a fan in me for sure. I hope to read more from you soon. =3

ahh, I simply love the way you wrote Roxas. Too bad Axel didn't have the chance to kiss him D:

Oh my God, the last line nearly made me cry. It was phenomenal. It perfectly illustrated the end of the word.

Another excellent one. It was so... touching. Surreal. I just... wow. I can't really explain. Your fanfics are so good that I can't go on about all the things I like about them.

I like how I'm reading your brilliant fanfiction instead of my design homework.

You gave me tears at 4.

I feel slightly stupid for saying this... but I bawled my eyes out while reading this story. Now, I'm not majorly hormonal or anything, and thus it is pretty hard to make me do that. So I mean that as a huge compliment.

I love how you didn't really bash us over the head with the idea of this unknown apocalypse. Just small details, like school being out, or no people to tell them what should be doing, or Roxas' parents killing themselves. You ghost over those, because they aren't the character's main concern, at this point. I think that when the world comes to an end, you would be very hard pressed to find something that *mattered*. And I think this is what makes the story such a smashing fantastic love story - the idea that they both mattered enough to each other to not just spiral into apathy.

I think that was ultimately what made me sob like a loser - the fact that they finally found something like that and then bam (literally) it gets taken away. Axel's anger and Roxas' comfort that this wasn't the end really got to me.

So in this long, convoluted response I think I was basically trying to say GOOD JOB and WAY TO MAKE ME CRY, JERK, and I LOVE YOUR WRITING, and TEACH ME YOUR SECRETS. Or something along those lines. =) So once again, fantastic story.

...Uhm, hi.

I just wanted to comment and kinda say... thanks(?).

I got some really, really, /really/ awful news the other day, and reading your stories makes me feel a whole lot better.

They're just really... satisfing and kinda help me sleep at night.

Just the right spot between emotionally draining (in the good way) and so... post-orgasm amazing that it numbs me down.



And god lord do I feel crazy and embarresed right now... ^^;

absolutely stunning, earth-breakingly beautiful. magnifique! (french quota for the day: filled)

hey love, you are wonderful and shining and made up of a thousand pieces of color,
every bit a smooth edge and something new to cherish in your palms.

it is a treasure, a tesoro, an total-fucking-joy to read your genius. what a brilliant concept, what wonderful execution.

may i gush about your fic?
aha, too late for permission now.

i am already in love with you.
:)

please continue lighting up the sky, etc etc etc.

AW <3

I. I-I am speechless. It was just so beautiful and sad and awesome and oh my gosh, I think I might be in love (or some other thing possibly like that). :D

Makes me want to cry, cry, cry. It's hard to write something good in such a small amount of words. Everything, like poetry, has to be perfect. Every word must impart meaning, every image must be dense. A masterpiece in 2,0 words. Aching, beautiful--because life is rarely fair, and sometimes we don't get things right in time.

Thank you for sharing.

Sweet,a part i love the most from this fanfic is the ending,but the whoLe story is also very good,
btw, more discription would make this story seem deeper (and longer,i love long oneshot ^^)
keep up good work.!

Oh, this is lovely and melancholy and I like it very much. You captured a lot in a relatively short piece and the ending really tugged at me. Powerful writing, good imagery and the last two sections are amazingly beautiful. Well done!

This story was so sad that I actually started to tear up in the end. It was just so sweet. Great job on the story, this has been favorited :D

This story makes my stomach all queezy.
I had a dream that the world was ending a couple days ago..
D;

But other thank thank I love everything

Your writing is pocketfuls of amazing and sunshine and prettiness--I'd like to wrap it up in a box and share it with other people.

I like all of your pieces, but this...is undoubtably my favorite. & oddly enough, I think the part I like the most is whenever you talk about how Roxas has got those bony fingers (which seems to appear in your stories a lot) and Axel seems to always be staring at them. I dunno, I guess it's because hands are important?

Axel's so cute in this. "This is like, really fucking awesome." :D And that brief bit of AxelLarxene interaction is good as well--I'm not opposed to them as a couple, but I like them better as buddies.

I've run out of halfway-intelligent things to say. Oh dear.

Ta!

Hearts,
Icchan