I've read these chapters before and I must say...I like it! I hope you update soon, I really wanna know what'll happen with squall and cloud and how things will turn out. :D I'll stay posted!

I love where your going with this story and while I notice that it's been so long since you updated last I can only hope for a new chapter in the future. The concept behind this story is one of my hidden loves and that fact that you wrote what you have so far made my day. Not only that but I love you Cloud/Squall interactions haha it's so cute. Out of curiosity is it going to to be a Tidus/Seifer pairing? Anyway. Hope you have a great that this review finds you well. Cameron

I just have to go 'aawww' at the thought of a little Squall. I like what I am readin so far and hope you update soon.

Is this story being continued? Because it rocks.

I know it's been a year, but i hope you update this soon!

xD Poor Seifer! "Boot to the head!"

Well more like ball to the face, but still n.n

I really hope you keep writing this! It's great!

Seifer got hit in the face! Lol, go Tidus!

Hey! Is this story dead?

I really like it already and I want to see how it goes! :(

I really hope that you continue to write this at some point, I just came back to read it for the second time, and it's easily my favourite Dissidia fic I've found so far. You do a wonderful job keeping everyone in character, and the potential for the story is huge- I really want to see what's going to happen!

Also, because I spend way too much time daydreaming, I thought it would be awesome if Terra/Tina showed up in Esthar, with Onion Knight... the public would go into mass panic at the appearance of a new 'sorceress and knight'. Bartz/Butz would totally just be hanging out with Chocoboy in the Chocobo forests. :)

Are you here? :3 I enjoyed this one I hope you'll come and update it sometime! Although, I have a feeling you might not, since you haven't updated any fics since last year, apparently. Soo... Hope you come back! :)

tell me this fic will still be continued [puppy eyes] This is a great fic, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next :)

*twitch*ohdeargod PLEASE dont tell me your gunna pair up Tidus and Seifer PLEASE oh and also PLEASE UPDATE SON!

lol, love the story! Please update again soon!

OMG TIDUS! XD This fic is very, very good! Sad that it hasn't been updated in awhile. :(

This is a really interesting story so far. You've done a great job with the characters and I can't wait to see how you're going to introduce the other Dissidia heroes. There really is a lot of potential here and from what I've read so far it seems like you'll be able to see it throuh.

The English isn't always perfect but it is very good and let's face it not even native speakers are always perfect (I shoud know since my writing isn't great and I'm a native spaker). I've tried to read fics by people that have English as their first language that are impossible to read because of grammar/spelling mistakes. So I think you've done an excellent job. Sorry if this comes across as condescending, that really isn't my intention.

In short a very well written, very interesting fic with a great pairing. I look forward to more.