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Caithdean
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
lol, love the story! Please update again soon!
Manders1953
2009-09-30 . chapter 2
OMG TIDUS! XD This fic is very, very good! Sad that it hasn't been updated in awhile. :(
vicious-kitsune
2009-09-21 . chapter 2
This is a really interesting story so far. You've done a great job with the characters and I can't wait to see how you're going to introduce the other Dissidia heroes. There really is a lot of potential here and from what I've read so far it seems like you'll be able to see it throuh.

The English isn't always perfect but it is very good and let's face it not even native speakers are always perfect (I shoud know since my writing isn't great and I'm a native spaker). I've tried to read fics by people that have English as their first language that are impossible to read because of grammar/spelling mistakes. So I think you've done an excellent job. Sorry if this comes across as condescending, that really isn't my intention.

In short a very well written, very interesting fic with a great pairing. I look forward to more.
AkumaStrife
2009-09-21 . chapter 2
i like where this story is headed, can't wait for updates =)
MinaTakahashii
2009-09-09 . chapter 2
Wow, I really like the idea behind this and think it's written well ^^ Though the slight cliffhanger at the end killed me D: So please update soon!
shinichylde
2009-09-09 . chapter 2
I have to say this story is utterly amusing so far, I love how you've kept all the characters in the respective personalities. It makes things feel more realistic to the game plots.
I just got the game a week ago myself and have been playing it ever since so this story makes me very happy, keep up the great work and I hope to read more soon.
*Grins* Also I love the last bit in chapter two, the cliffie is awesome, Poor Seifers gets a blitz ball in the face. He is gonna HATE Tidus.
Andou Hayate
2009-09-07 . chapter 2
Very interesting so far. I always love to see these two together, there aren't enough fics for them...looking forward to an update!
Kareian
2009-09-01 . chapter 2
I can't wait for chapter 3! I just got the game and started playing it - I was so happy to see a section for it on !! ^_^
Micha Arian
2009-08-31 . chapter 2
So intriguing, especially with the world of FFVI as the premise :D
Looking forward for more! <3
Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
Wow! I really like this story, udate soon please, keep writting, good luck and see ya!
Mahon
2009-08-24 . chapter 2
I felt DFF Cloud isn't taken from post-AC because man, some of his pre-fight lines can get pretty emo. Nonetheless, this is pretty interesting so far! Keep up the lovely work.
Metamorcy
2009-07-05 . chapter 2
PLease update soon! This is getting so interesting! Me begging here!
randompasserby
2009-04-01 . chapter 2
ohohoho...seifer's entrance made me laugh!

what's even better is cuz it has squall and cloud in it...and both are so IC!
Vedensolina
2009-03-22 . chapter 2
Oh I am glad somebody is writing in this category, I have been waiting to read some good Dissidia yaoi and this one seems pretty promising so far! Ans I think it's good that there won't be 'Rinoa bashing', because even though I don't really like her character that much, it gets a bit old that everybody (pretty childishly if you ask me) writes her as a total **. But anyway, I can't wait to read more of this story.
PomPomGirL
2009-03-08 . chapter 2
LOL! Poor Seifer! That was a bliztball, right? Can't wait for next chapter!
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