You've portrayed the tragedy of Harold so well in this story. Imprisoned by his own guilty conscience so that he over thinks things and then ends up disappointed!

At the beginning when Albert shouted 'Harold! You're breakfast's ready' I could just hear it! Very in character for both of them. I also like the way you have caught the relationship between them so well. Albert's love for Harold tainted by selfishness.

Poor Harold. Great chapter :)

It was worth taking a break from mid-terms to read this! I am starting to get familiar with the Not so-Dynamic Duo :D and you write them rather well. It's nice to see that despite the anomisty Albert really does care about his son. This is such a sweet story in a strange way and very funny. Poor Harold maybe one day. :(