 Nytd 5/2/09 . chapter 5Nice collection of haiku.
Think it's fascinating how much you manage to say in such a short space. These obviously need to be well thought out to fit as a haiku and tell a story.
Nice job!
(You should check out Freidon's collection of PotC haiku, also!) |
 Flygon Pirate 5/1/09 . chapter 5How very interesting. I can imagine the locket as I read this!
I hope you do more! :D |
 Flygon Pirate 5/1/09 . chapter 4Wow...that so reminds me of Phantom of the Opera! WOO HOO!
You're doing a fabulous job! |
 Flygon Pirate 5/1/09 . chapter 3Once again, you capture so much vivid images in less than 20 syables!
You are good at poerty! |
 Flygon Pirate 5/1/09 . chapter 2Wow. That sure explains a lot in 17 sylables! I liked it!
Awesome! |
 Nytd 2/26/09 . chapter 1Again you manage to capture the dark and powerful creature that Jones is.
"Through countless wild, deadly, pitch-black nights
When I play its tune again and again
And thrust poor sailors into shaking fright."
Great imagery woven into this!
Nicely done! |
 Flygon Pirate 2/26/09 . chapter 1Wow...
I cannot believe how FREAKING good you are with these Davy one-shots. They are so amazing. That one had such a good rhythm to it and I loved it!
Awesome job! Do more! Do more! :D
Keep it up! I 'm loving it! |