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Silver Shadowbreeze
2009-04-06 . chapter 4
One small thing can change everything, huh? Now we're gonna start seeing more effects in the next chapter, right? The most obvious thing that changed is that Kaito goes to the same school as Shinichi and Ran. Keep up the good work!

Shadow
Katty008
2009-04-02 . chapter 4
This is really good. I'm really looking forward to more.
Ningen Demonai
2009-04-02 . chapter 4
"He started to call you some other girl’s name before he stopped himself mid-sentence" - Oh OUCH. Oh Kaito, still thinking of Aoko. ;;

But hahah, it's good to know that Kaito's still as prank-ish as ever, ESPECIALLY with Shinichi. They make a fun duo! And thanks for updating~
DarkWolfYoukai860
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
XD Kaito vs Shinichi = awesome no matter how trivial. So, has Shinichi taken Hakuba's place in this fic? Kaito's not really blending in at all. Great chapter. Please update soon. :)
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
Hahahaha! Kaito picking on Shinichi like he does to Hakuba...Classic...XD
I'm so waiting the time when Kaito and Aoko meet!! X3
Great chapter btw!! ^^ *pops in cookie*
Eleven Clovers
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
Awesome! Very nice characterisation of Shinichi :D
Yay, a nice dose of silliness after the angsty chappie, although it made a little sad when Shinichi was referring to Kaito as 'Takada' :( Kuroba is a much nicer surname..
s2lou
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
Hey, happy April Fools' day! That was the perfect chapter for today *hums happily* *is busy cutting down fishes in paper*
... also. Oh, Kaito. It's so good to see you're still your wonderful, mischievous self after all that angst xD and jealous!Shinichi is priceless. He would so totally be like that before the series began–and now? he'd probably shoot him off with his watchgun or something. As for Ran–b'aw. Cute as ever. :3
bobbyneko
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
nice! I love it! Except for Shinichi being uber jealous, they were so in character. but hey! Shinichi before he turned conan would totally be like that so nevermind! it works, it fits with the story, and i like that!! great job, great writing. Original plot and great characterization. criticism? i think not :P even though i know you authors like that kind of thing, but if i truely enjoyed it and recognized it as a great piece of work, i see no need to complain : )
Mel72000
2009-04-01 . chapter 4
I love this chapter and the match between Kaito and Shinichi ! I wait the update, hurry up, please !
Thank you !
hattergems
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
Interesting~. But the way Ran and Shinichi call Kaito a "boy" is a bit odd. Otherwise, very nice!
YumeTakato
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
Haha~ The "tyranny". XD

Nice chapter.
katiesparks
2009-03-20 . chapter 3
I KNEW he wasn't dead! Who could possibly kill off KAITO after all?

KIRBY: *taps katie on shoulder* *whispers in ear*

Oh, yeah. THOSE. Let me rephrase that. Who could possibly kill Kaito off without REMORSE?

KIRBY: *whispers more*

What? They hate Kaitou Kid? What kinda of Conan fangirls are they?

KIRBY: *whispers*

They don't like him just because Conan can't CATCH him? That's so stupid! Do they hate Yuusaku-sama just because Shinichi never solves the case right when he's around?

KIRBY: *nods solemnly*

What freaks! Ah, but this has gotten too long. Abayo Fyliwion-sama!
Eleven Clovers
2009-03-20 . chapter 3
He's alive! He's alive! But of course!
Love the portrayal of Kaito in this chapter, and I feel so bad for him. Poor guy, he was born to shine! Meh, blending shmending :P
Can't wait for the next chappie :D
WolfDaughter
2009-03-19 . chapter 3
Ah, good! Both Kaito and his mother survived. It'll be so interesting to see where you go with this story and what has changed due to these new circumstances. I feel so sorry for Kaito though! He practically *lives* for attention and mischief. Trying to "blend in" 24/7...blech. Trying to picture Kaito being solemn on a regular basis is just strange. At least he has an outlet in his heists, however dangerous said outlet may be.
SageofAges729
2009-03-19 . chapter 3
Wah! Kaito! Poor guy...I'd imagine he'd be bored as all hell, the guy's a friggen' genius. Although...what on earth could he manage to do with some frogs, tanuki, and the tennis club? Eh, it's Kaito, I'm sure he could think of something. Nice job, hope to see more soon.
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