That made me feel calm. And hungry, because of the smell of fish and chips downstairs. But still, it was great.

THis is really good.

AWESOME job. You really portrayed Yusei's feelings. Keep up the good work!

I like how you made it like you were talking but Yusei actually is. You are a great Authoer.

I will love this story a treasure it with all I can give.

Thank You for writing this!

-Larissa

Both Genie and MeTube are correct

This reminds me of the episode when Yusei and Aki dueled.

When he was trying to get through to her.

Yup, the english dub is still there :(

This is very perceptive of Yusei, taking note of Akiza's inner turmoil.

Very impressive - conveys Yusei quite well. A!