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Secret Symphony
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
This made me think more and more. For some reason, it never really occured to me the ties we have with an arm or a leg. Winry realizing her error and the fact that automail is not the same as the leg you ran through fields with was awesome. Excellent job.
Moonshine 369
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Another touching piece. I love the way you charactarize Winry. It's realistic and rational. You've done a great job. I would have given you first place. :)

~Moony
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