*doleful eyes* i believe Cyclops will triumph... but the thing is, evil, heartless Scott is so *sexy*! i love how you explored the two facets of Scott... a mesmerising fic:)

Wow... that just blew me away. Really interesting story. Scott does seem like just a cookie cut out of what Xavier wants... seems he's a manipulated illushion of his original self. Really thought provoking! Good job!

Mmore of this story PLEASE!

More please!

I enjoyed this little bit, but I'm confused as to why Cyclops couldn't just save her...

Very, VERY well done. Intriguing premise. I've always suspected that Scott had something like this going on - ever since it became clear that Xavier is controlling his mind.

You can't just leave it there! Write more! Pleassse!