Glad Alec knows that he has someone to turn to when he questions his sanity.

Nicely done overall D

Oh wow for the emotional roller coaster between Max and Alec.

Well done!

Love it that Original Cindy is on Alec's side because Max is just being a hypocrite...she was as reckless as Alec before she met Logan.

Poor Alec with the dreams and the self-doubt he has on the subject of Ben.

I feel bad for Max after Alec's outburst but I'm glad he said it.

A lot of things going on, I'll start with the dream.. Creeped me out, that he liked killing her, frightening her. I would have liked it if it would have been in italics (the dream), ot would have given it some sort of dreamy feeling. The same goes for his thoughs, like it's a whole other feeling going on. But it's OK, still, so whitchever.

It's sad that he's avoiding her, and it's obviously bothering Max, more than she would admit... But we'll see if she decided to do something about it.

great story

Well, it wasn't the romantic ending that I prefer, but it was totally the way this fic should have ended. It focused on their solidarity, their understanding each other, their supporting each other, and their ability to work anything out as long as they are there for each other. I really liked this fic. Good job ;)

What a great chapter ;) I love how they're opening up to each other and supporting each other. Good work :)

I really, really liked that chapter. It totally got to the heart of their problems. Very well done :)

Interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where you went with this. (Btw- revere means basically honor something or praise something; reverie is when you're thinking about something/daydreaming)

I really liked this story. The Alec breakdown and his feelings about Ben were real well written. Alec's feelings about Ben are never mentioned in the show so it's grerat to see them come out in a story like this. It was real good.

Hey!

i don't ever want to read that any of your stories "suck", ok?

I would like to think that I have good tase, I stay up all hours of the night reading this stuff because everone who write this stuff should be hired by the Jame Camron to inprove season 2.

In all honesty, the ending did "feed" incomplete BUT the idea was excellent.

Change is never easy and Alex has handled it very well, your story also has that element, but he has some very reasonable bumps in the road, I "read" Alex's dream of killing Max and "killing" the change of Manicore positon in Alex's life, not of him killing Max, he may have regreats that he did not have more of a hand in it, considing all that Maxicore has put him throught...

THANK YOU

all I can give you is one statement THAT ROCKED

ALEC AND MAx forever!

hey! That was a cool fic, it took on a different ideas that i had never thought of:) Very cool, you should write more!

Good story, I loved the fight scene where she just crashes into his apartment like she lives there!