Ah, such angst is hard to find these days. Your ability to depress far surpasses my own. Amazing story.

interesting (in a good way)
really good story, well written and you projected the feelings really well, a really good story:)

Hey, that's cute.

i really liked it!

Wow, Quinny, another awesome story (yes it's Chelsea). Very angsty but also quite moving. You managed to put one of my favorite songs into a fantastic plot. I do hope you keep writing soon :)