Very charming, and I liked the Romeo and Juliet reference... :)

This was so good. <3<3

Beautiful!

I LOVED It. It was Awesome. I really hope you keep writing fanfics! =D

That was amazing

Warm, sappy, fluffy and utterly cute! Love it! Although, I have to say, the title reminded me of John Tucker Must Die, that movie... Hmn, anyway, good work! *brownies*

haha. this was amazing.

hilarious and adorable!

“Yes. The Beautiful Children. They’ll have my messy hair and her smile and her eyes and my strong, male physique. I’ll enter them in beauty pageants and they’d win!”

oh boys! :D

I liked it. Very good.

Amazing! I love the ending, too. =D That was brilliant.

But I love the ending part. "I do."

amazing story =)
yay for slash, and i loved the story

I LOVE THIS

Adorable.

That was cute =)

Aww! So sweet. :)