Woo! Three chapters at once - good work!

Aw, poor Astera, I really want everything to be alright for her, and for creepy Ria to go away (what is her problem?)

hope you write more soon, and sorry for the anonymous review - couldn't be bothered to sign in.

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MORE!

Please write more! :) :)

Wow, nice plotline. I also like the idea of how Dave doesn't really want to use Astera anymore, and that he is actually kind of falling for her. I do feel bad for Edie though, even though she doesn't know. I look forward to figuring out how this all opens up, and how you work your two new characters into the finale.

Oh yea, Ria creeps me out almost as much as George from Season 2! But that's okay :)

Oh my god. This is an awesome story. Sometimes it's like reading a script but I don't mind that. In fact, it makes it kinda special. :D

Please keep writing!

Hi, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while

Great few chapters

well done

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No! Dave don't you dare break Astera's heart! I'll kil you! But I'm so glad they finally hooked up. More tension please :) I kind of stopped watching this after season 3, but I'm thinking of watching it again. Ria seems like a psycho

Aww, poor Astera.

Love the cuteness between her and Mike btw

Good chapter

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Oh My Gosh, creepy Dave strikes again . . . dun dun DUN.


Another great chapter, keep up the good work

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Another brilliant chapter!

Looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next - I have to know how Dave and Astera's relationship is going to progress. The little moments between them are kinda cute, but then I remember that he's a lunatic.

Need to know what the history with Ria and Carlos and Gabby is,

Keep going please,


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Oh my gosh,

I can't believe that just happened - it's the sort of thing that would actually happen on the show. Well done!

Can't wait to find out what happens next,

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Wow, this is really good.

Sorry I have't reviewed it in a while, I can't believe it doesn't have more than 2 reviews already.

You write really well, everyone seems very in character, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Dave and Astera. And what's going on with Ria too.

Katie


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brilliant story

hope that you update soon

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Great storyline! Can't wait to read more :)