This chapter was a really good way to end this story. I loved it. Hope you have a new story soon.
~Nell~

WOW!! That was really great. That Phil guy was such a jerk. I just wanted to reach into the screen and punch him in the face. Anywho, great job. Jess kicks butt!

Final chapter was brilliant so glad Jess finally let it all out! Can't wait to rea more of your stories!

I really liked it :D I'm glad Phil is going away for along time.

I love that Don got Jess to open up and tell him everything that was bothering her. Phil definately deserved to lose his badge and go to Rikers. I'm glad the evidence was found to bring him in. The backstory you gave for his first shooting was great and really felt like something that could really be part of his own history as a detective of the NYPD. Jess telling off that despicable Phil was perfect and a reaction I picture her having if something like this ever happen to her on the series.

I'm glad that Mac was able to help Jess and Don out and Phil is in custody now. This story is very interesting and I hope that the competant IAB officials will believe them all when they tell them what happened.

Hey! I really like this please add more soon its brilliant!

I loved it :D I'm so glad they got Phil he's a complete jerk! Update soon please :D

that was awesome! update soon!

Phil the IAB guy is terrible. He has no right to proposition Jessica like that or manhandle her either. I hope she can prove that he's a jerk as well as clear Don's name.

I don't like this IAB guy I hope Flack and Angell get him back for this! I lived this chapter :D Update soon please :D

poor jess! that guy's a dog. update soon!

O I really really like this so far. The plot is good, I always have a little trouble coming up with plots for my bones stories so major props! Looking forward to more soon.
`Nell`

Really good story so far. Update when you can!

good story so far!

cant wait for more