| Reviews for The Short Straw |
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bec 1/18/13 . chapter 1 Great story. Nice rewrite. |
SaraBahama 11/1/11 . chapter 1Beautifully done, Annerb! I enjoyed every moment of it. The description of Carter's self-depreciating huff of laughter was so perfectly HER. Wonderful storytelling. |
SimplyEffective 10/29/11 . chapter 1"Carter!" he bellows. Three years of working together guarantees that she reacts instantly, her body following the commands of a man her brain hasn't had time to remind her isn't allowed to order her around anymore. That was my absolute favorite part. Great story. |
LAIsobel 8/16/11 . chapter 1I guess we all had been thinking about this option... maybe not the end but definitely the Carter pulling the short straw part... wow what an outcome. I guess it would take them a lot more to accept it and deal with it but well... the story itself was kinda good! |
Cellar Door 26 7/8/09 . chapter 1This story makes me swoon. |
Silverishmoon 5/31/09 . chapter 1XD love it! |
framework4 5/7/09 . chapter 1Delightful AU. I loved the interaction. |
Sarae64 3/10/09 . chapter 1Lovely little twist on Shades of Grey...nicely done. :) |
StarnightSam 3/1/09 . chapter 1Wow! such a simple but great story. You always catch every emotion and feeling just as I think they are between them! Loved this. It was just as good as the series version of Jack and Daniel! Thanks! |
i.m. nell 2/27/09 . chapter 1What a delightful twist to Shades of Grey. |
sapphiretwin369 2/27/09 . chapter 1I always love fic that deal with 'what if Sam had drawn the short straw?' Loved your version of Shades of Gray. I could definitely picture that conversation happening. Jack said what I would have pictured him saying if he was trying to be a jerk to Sam. Nice job! |
Bunnylass 2/27/09 . chapter 1Absolutely fantastic! I loved it...Just like I knew I would! :) |
ALIMOO1971 2/27/09 . chapter 1great short story, is Makepeace dead? keep up the good work |
dp 2/26/09 . chapter 1 Wonderful Story. |
BettyHall223 2/26/09 . chapter 1I like your version of this episode. |