|Reviews for The Short Straw|
| bec 1/18/13 . chapter 1
Great story. Nice rewrite.
| SaraBahama 11/1/11 . chapter 1
Beautifully done, Annerb! I enjoyed every moment of it. The description of Carter's self-depreciating huff of laughter was so perfectly HER. Wonderful storytelling.
| SimplyEffective 10/29/11 . chapter 1
"Carter!" he bellows.
Three years of working together guarantees that she reacts instantly, her body following the commands of a man her brain hasn't had time to remind her isn't allowed to order her around anymore.
That was my absolute favorite part. Great story.
| LAIsobel 8/16/11 . chapter 1
I guess we all had been thinking about this option... maybe not the end but definitely the Carter pulling the short straw part... wow what an outcome. I guess it would take them a lot more to accept it and deal with it but well... the story itself was kinda good!
| Cellar Door 26 7/8/09 . chapter 1
This story makes me swoon.
| Silverishmoon 5/31/09 . chapter 1
XD love it!
| framework4 5/7/09 . chapter 1
Delightful AU. I loved the interaction.
| Sarae64 3/10/09 . chapter 1
Lovely little twist on Shades of Grey...nicely done. :)
| StarnightSam 3/1/09 . chapter 1
Wow! such a simple but great story. You always catch every emotion and feeling just as I think they are between them! Loved this. It was just as good as the series version of Jack and Daniel! Thanks!
| i.m. nell 2/27/09 . chapter 1
What a delightful twist to Shades of Grey.
| sapphiretwin369 2/27/09 . chapter 1
I always love fic that deal with 'what if Sam had drawn the short straw?' Loved your version of Shades of Gray. I could definitely picture that conversation happening. Jack said what I would have pictured him saying if he was trying to be a jerk to Sam. Nice job!
| Bunnylass 2/27/09 . chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic! I loved it...Just like I knew I would! :)
| ALIMOO1971 2/27/09 . chapter 1
great short story, is Makepeace dead? keep up the good work
| dp 2/26/09 . chapter 1
| BettyHall223 2/26/09 . chapter 1
I like your version of this episode.