Great story. Nice rewrite.

Beautifully done, Annerb! I enjoyed every moment of it. The description of Carter's self-depreciating huff of laughter was so perfectly HER. Wonderful storytelling.

"Carter!" he bellows.

Three years of working together guarantees that she reacts instantly, her body following the commands of a man her brain hasn't had time to remind her isn't allowed to order her around anymore.

That was my absolute favorite part. Great story.

I guess we all had been thinking about this option... maybe not the end but definitely the Carter pulling the short straw part... wow what an outcome. I guess it would take them a lot more to accept it and deal with it but well... the story itself was kinda good!

This story makes me swoon.

XD love it!

Delightful AU. I loved the interaction.

Lovely little twist on Shades of Grey...nicely done. :)

Wow! such a simple but great story. You always catch every emotion and feeling just as I think they are between them! Loved this. It was just as good as the series version of Jack and Daniel! Thanks!

What a delightful twist to Shades of Grey.

I always love fic that deal with 'what if Sam had drawn the short straw?' Loved your version of Shades of Gray. I could definitely picture that conversation happening. Jack said what I would have pictured him saying if he was trying to be a jerk to Sam. Nice job!

Absolutely fantastic! I loved it...Just like I knew I would! :)

great short story, is Makepeace dead? keep up the good work

Wonderful Story.

I like your version of this episode.