I loooved this journey inside Edward's brain. You write him very well!

I do wonder, in the grand scheme of canon, how he went from being on board with the change in this scene to voting against her at the mansion. Any chance you feel like writing that shift in another outtake? I think you would knock it out of the park!

Anyhoo, this story was awesome and I'm so glad I discovered it :-)

Perfect. You wrote the characters right for their role. I enjoyed this, thanks... :)

A wonderful story indeed! I liked it!

In a way I feel the reunion in New Moon happened too quickly for me, not necessarily time frame wise, but after all that agony, it would have been nicer spending more pages on the healing and resolution. I always enjoy when writers like yourself spend time in Edward's brain, indulging my obsession. You had a good feel for him here. Thank you :)

Very nice to see Edward finally accepting the inevitable. Loved the conversation between him and Alice.

Well done!

Great job! I loved it. Can't wait for more stories from you :) Four Stars.

I LOVE it...can't say it much better than that. ;o)

Aww this was cute and good!